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Rescue workers are noble humans.

Rescue workers are noble humans. 55RxP
Rescue workers are noble humans. They always rescue their lives for other people. I had seen a great sacrifice from those men when I was young. The story started when the fire throughout our house. I started to cry out for support. Someone was passing by and, has seen all that was happening. He started to get a rope, through it upwards so he could support us. I noticed what he was trying to do consequently I started to advise him. I catch the rope, helped him to ascent to the window. When he reached there, I call out my brother and sister who were s tucked in the kitchen. I trod there to assist them with the assistance of the man. Accidentally, the fire hadn’t reached the door consequently I was able to support them. Without the support of the man. Maybe, someone has lost his life. I owed him a lot.
Rescue workers are noble humans. They always rescue their
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seen
a great sacrifice from those
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men
when I was young. The story
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started
when the fire throughout our
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house
. I
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to cry out for
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support
. Someone was passing by and, has
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seen
all that was happening. He
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started
to
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get
a rope, through it upwards
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so
he could
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support
us. I noticed what he was trying to do
consequently
I
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started
to advise him. I catch the rope,
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helped
him to ascent to the window. When he reached there, I call out my brother and sister who were s tucked in the kitchen. I trod there to assist them with the assistance of the
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man
.
Accidentally
, the fire hadn’t reached the door
consequently
I was able to
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support
them.

Without the
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support
of the
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man
. Maybe, someone has lost his life. I owed him a lot.
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IELTS essay Rescue workers are noble humans.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
153 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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