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Write a paragraph ( 80-120 words) about how you help poor children.

Write a paragraph ( 80-120 words) about how you help poor children. o8aWg

Helping poor offspring is considered one of my pleasures. To express my love to them, it is a habit of mine to keep my old useful things clean and beautiful, especially my textbooks, clothes and toys so as to give them to local charity to support who need help. Moreover, when I have free time, I tend to teach children who are not capable of going to school in my neighborhood Maths, English and Science. They eager to know more about the world they are living and I find that not only do they enhance their knowledge but I also understand more clearly what I have been taught after answering their curious questions. In addition, on some special occasions, for example Tet holiday and Mid-Autumn festival, I help my mom with preparing food and cakes to hold a small party for them so that they can have joy. As I grow up, I am giving help to more and more people to make this world a happier place to live.

Helping poor offspring is considered
 one of my pleasures. To express my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to them, it is a habit of mine to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 useful things clean and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
, especially
 my textbooks, clothes and toys 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
 give them to local charity to support who need This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
. Moreover
, when I have free time, I tend to teach children who are not capable of going to school in my neighborhood Possible spelling mistake. 'Maths' is British English.Math
Maths
, English and Science. They eager to know more about the world they are living and I find that not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 do they enhance their knowledge This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I also
 understand more clearly
 what I have been taught
 after answering their curious questions. In addition
, on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 special occasions, for example
 Tet holiday and Mid-Autumn festival, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 my mom with preparing food and cakes to hold a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 party for them This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they can have joy. As I grow up, I am giving This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to more and more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 this world a happier place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
. 