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Request letter about visiting the town

Request letter about visiting the town wmlmd

My lovely friend, Lola I am writing to enquire if you could possibly inform me the town which is located in the university. I really want to travel there. I consider that there are many sightseeing places. I imagine there every day. When and how will I go there? Moreover, I may stay at my cousin's house or other my relatives. I think I will spend one or two hours on the way because there is not far from my home. Afterwards I will arrive at there. You described the university so colourful I seem as if I were there and I saw everywhere in my eyes and true life. I ask for something which I desire to go in the evening. Can you recommend somewhere which we can have a rest? I think there are many entertainment places there. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. SincerelySayyora

My lovely friend, Lola I am writing to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 if you could possibly
 inform me the town which is located
 in the university. I really
 want to travel there. I consider that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 sightseeing places. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 imagine there every day. When and how will I go there? Moreover
, I may stay at my cousin's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 or other my relatives. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I will spend one or two hours on the way This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there is not far from my home. Afterwards I will arrive at there. You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizedportrayed
described
 the university This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Possible spelling mistake. 'colourful' is British English.colorful
colourful
 I seem as if I were there and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 everywhere in my eyes and true life. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
 something which I desire to go in the evening. Can you recommend somewhere which we can have a rest? I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 entertainment places there. I look forward to hearing from you as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. Possible spelling mistake found.
SincerelySayyora