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Report on wave-energy machine

This is a picture of wave-energy machine. In this report, I am going to provide the information of this machine - how it works, its features, where you can locate and which option should you go for? First of all, let's understand what is the purpose of this wave-energy machine. Wave-energy machine is used to produce electricity through sea waves. When the air is flown inside the machine and the water level starts rising then it produces electrical energy which we can use for several uses. This wave-energy machine is installed in the sea. The machine has a generator fitted into it and inside the machine, 2 turbines are fixed which are run by the electricity generator. The turbine in the top chamber is responsible to pull the air and the bottom turbine pulls the water up. The air from the top puts pressure which makes the water level rise high. This creates high volume of electricity and this form of electricity is cheaper than electrical energy producing options. As we said that this machine is installed in the sea however the amount of electrical energy produced by this machine depends on its location. The deeper you install it in the water, the larger waves will be and large waves will give high output however small waves give low output. However you will should think of cost as well when you install this machine. The machine which are installed deep in the sea have high installation costs than the one which are close to the shores. If you think you need electricity for your personal use then you should go for the option with low installation cost. Hope the above details were information and helpful. Let us know in case you have any further query.
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how it works, its features, where you can locate and which option should you go for?

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. Wave-energy
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to produce
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electricity
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level
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rising then it produces electrical energy which we can
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This wave-energy
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is installed
in the
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sea
. The
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has a generator fitted into it and inside the
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, 2 turbines are
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which
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generator. The turbine in the top chamber is responsible to pull the air and the bottom turbine pulls the
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up.

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level rise
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volume of
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and this form of
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is cheaper than electrical energy producing options.

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is installed
in the
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depends on its location. The deeper you install it in the
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, the larger
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IELTS essay Report on wave-energy machine

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
295 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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