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Online shopping - why or why not?

These days buying things on the internet is becoming more and more popular which means one does not have to go to a shop to buy a thing he wants and rather can order it from his/her computer/mobile and get it delivered at his doorstep. Online shopping was first started in 1990s however it gained popularly in 2000s when mobiles also became essential for all households. To order anything online, you just need a computer or a mobile and a good internet. Buying anything online is just like buying anything from shop except that you can do it from home. It is just not grocieries, you can also purchase books, book airflight/train tickets online. When you are buying anything online, you can also spend time and select from the available choices. Personally speaking, I am a person who does not like to wait in the long queue to buy my stuff and rather I will search in the internet and purchase online. When you buy anything online, if you do not find anything then you can search for that item from another shop or notify the seller that you are looking for an item and he should let you know when it is available again. While we are talking about buying things on the internet, we should also understand advantages and disadvantages of online shopping. Online shopping has definitely made life more comfortable however when you buy things online then you end up by spending more as you buy more things instead of just buying the esssentials. Also people have become lazy and the interaction with the outside world is now decreasing since people don't go out of their houses. However in the recent times, when Covid 19 is at peak, we should not think of interaction and rather maintain social distance. Hence buying things online is safer than going outside.

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buying
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have to
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buy
 a thing he wants and rather
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get
 it delivered at his doorstep.

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started
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in 1990s
however
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in 2000s
 when mobiles also
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anything
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online
, you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
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good
 internet.

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anything
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online
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just
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buying
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anything
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grocieries
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purchase
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airflight
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online
. When you are You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtransactionshopping
buying
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, you can also
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buy
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purchase
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When you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasebargainacquisitioninvestment
buy
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anything
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online
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anything
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item and
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let
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buying
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 when you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpurchasebargainacquisitioninvestment
buy
 things You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
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then
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end
 up by spending more Comparison requires “than”, not ‘then’ nor ‘as’.than
as
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buy
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just
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buying
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esssentials
. Also
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people
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now
 decreasing since This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 don't go out of their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 in the recent times, when Did you mean “COVID-19” or the alternative spelling “Covid-19” (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
Covid 19
 is at peak, we should not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 of interaction and rather
 maintain social distance. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
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buying
 things You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwirednetworked
online
 is safer than going outside. 