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report of students that want to walk in your country

report of students that want to walk in your country Nl7k2
Introduction The aim of this report is to inform students about the best season, places and equipment to go walking in our country. Location The Sibillini forest located in the western part of the region and it is perfect for walking. It's only 20 minutes far from the nearest city and is famous for the marvellous paths. Students have the possibility of admiring stunning landscapes and abundant wildlife Best season to walk Certainly, spring is the best moment of the year to visit our region. A huge variety of flora and fauna live in the forest and transform the view in a colorful painting. Equipment Although in spring the temperatures are quite comfortable, students should have all the equipment necessary to face bad weather conditions. For instance, jacket, sweatshirts and boots are highly recommended. Conclusion To sum up, Sibillini forest is one of the best place to visit but be aware of wildlife and weather conditions. For this reason, an adequate equipment is necessary.
Introduction

The aim of this report is to inform students about the best season, places and equipment to go walking in our country.

Location

The
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Sibillini
forest located in the western part of the region and it is perfect for walking. It's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
20 minutes far from the nearest city and is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
for the
Possible spelling mistake. 'marvellous' is British English.
marvellous
paths. Students have the possibility of admiring stunning landscapes and abundant wildlife

Best season to walk

Certainly
, spring is the best moment of the year to visit our region. A huge variety of flora and fauna
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in the forest and transform the view in a colorful painting.

Equipment

Although in spring the temperatures are quite comfortable, students should have all the equipment necessary to face
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
weather conditions.
For instance
, jacket, sweatshirts and boots are
highly
recommended.

Conclusion

To sum up,
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Sibillini
forest is one of the best place to visit
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
be aware of wildlife and weather conditions.
For this reason
,
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "adequate equipment".
an adequate equipment
is necessary.
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IELTS essay report of students that want to walk in your country

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
164 words
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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