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Industries growth is necessary to solve poverty or it is causing environment problems discuss both and opinion

Industries growth is necessary to solve poverty or it is causing environment problems discuss both and opinion 9wWgj
At present factories are increasing day by day it helps to provide jobs as well as needly things although it's is also creates pollution which is harmful for citizens. In the first step, begin with there are many benefits of industries. most of people does not equified they don't work in offices such as written although in the factory There are many jobs which can do by uneducated people. The industry gives many jobs which is easy to do. As per my perspective industries have some benefits and few disadvantage however Industries polluted environment although it provide many things which is necessary for human. To repatured the government should pass some rules which is related to safety of environment. as a result industries does not effect surrounding
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jobs which can do by uneducated
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IELTS essay Industries growth is necessary to solve poverty or it is causing environment problems discuss both and opinion

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