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replacing car with cycle . why this happening

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Nowadays trend for riding bicycle is increasing day by day and even in few metro city, people are replacing their car replacing car with cycle with cycle. There could be several root causes behind such change, and if asked, then this trend will have merits and demerits. Both the problem and my preference are elaborated further. To begin with the reason for diverting toward cycle is to reduce global warming and air pollution. It means, due to emerging population, number of vehicle running on road are increasing which exhale large volume of carbon dioxide and other harmful gases as a result quality of air defoliate and due to CO2 earth temperature is rising. Another point is to reducing the extraction of fossil fuel. If people move to cycle then usage and the demand of fuel will reduce drastically. Considering the decision, it will be advantageous for the human from my view. To begin with, riding a cycle has many health benefits. For instance, many health experts believe that peddaling daily will be fruitful for people to improve stamina, burn calories that reduce over weight and make bones stronger. Furthermore, travelling through bicycle make city clean and more greener because cycle need very less space to move eventually no major infrastructure is needed and no trees will be cut down. However, there are few detriments as well. Firstly, travelling in cycle for longer distance will be difficult because one cannot reach his desire destination on time and its more riskier as chance of getting hit by speedy car increases. Secondly, it is not suitable mode of transport during emergency situation like taking patient to the hospital on cycle. All in all it is eventually stated that car are being replaced by cycle that reduce global warming and reduce the demand of resource like fossil fuel. However, from my point of view it has health benefit and make the earth more green whereas difficult during emergency situation.
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with
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. There could be several root causes behind such
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change
, and if asked, then this trend will have merits and demerits. Both the problem and my preference
are elaborated
further
.

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begin
with the reason for diverting toward
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cycle
is to
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reduce
global warming and air pollution. It means, due to emerging population, number of vehicle running on road are increasing which exhale large volume of carbon dioxide and other harmful gases
as a result
quality of air defoliate and due to CO2 earth temperature is rising. Another point is
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to reducing
the extraction of fossil fuel. If
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people
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move
to
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cycle
then usage and the demand of fuel will
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reduce
drastically
.

Considering the decision, it will be advantageous for the human from my view. To
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with, riding a
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has
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health benefits.
For instance
,
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health experts believe that
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peddaling
daily will be fruitful for
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to
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improve
stamina, burn calories that
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reduce
over weight and
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make
bones stronger.
Furthermore
, travelling through bicycle
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make
city clean and
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more greener
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cycle
need
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very
less space to
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move
eventually
no major infrastructure
is needed
and no trees will be
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cut
down.

However
, there are few detriments
as well
.
Firstly
, travelling in
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cycle
for longer distance will be difficult
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because
one cannot reach his desire destination on time and its
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more riskier
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as
chance of getting hit by speedy
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car
increases.
Secondly
, it is not suitable mode of transport during emergency situation like taking patient to the hospital on cycle.

All in all it is
eventually
stated that
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car
are
being replaced
by
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cycle
that
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reduce
global warming and
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reduce
the demand of resource like fossil fuel.
However
, from my point of view it has health benefit and
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make
the earth more green whereas difficult during emergency situation.
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IELTS essay replacing car with cycle. why this happening

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
325 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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