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Reoffend is common nowadays. Describe its various reasons and provide effective solutions to it

Reoffend is common nowadays. Describe its various reasons and provide effective solutions to it GLYGg
The term re-offend refers to the reiterating of a crime after experiencing the negative consequences of it earlier. This practice is becoming a major issue of concern and there could be many reasons underlying which will be discussed thouroghly along with the efective solutions to mitigate this phenomenon. To commence with the causes of re-offending, the first and foremost, poor environment of prisons, double prisoners than its capacity are kept in a single cell and there are not even basic amenities for the criminals which make them frustrated. Also they are kept regardless of their level of crime due to which circumstantial criminals get exploited by the serious or brutal law-breakers. Moreover, loss of fear and respect, as a person who has came from jail have to face the relentless and disrespectful talks from the society even if they were declared innocent. As a result they develop hatred among the society and their fear of law and order diminishes which further leads them to perform illegal acts again. However, governing bodies and society should adopt many things which may be helpful to come out of this predicament. Firstly, provision for rehabilitation centres and incorporation of vocational courses in jails as it could instill various moral values in their minds which may encourage them not to break any law again. In addition to it, mankind should facilitate the people who just came from jail to cope up and to come out of this dilemma. So that, their mind become stable and they may not strive to attempt any unlawful act in future. To summarize, re-offend is cause of worry for whole world which is arisinv due to the worst environment rendered to the law breakers and exploitation from society. Whereas by the adoption of such things like provision of moral values in cells and generous behaviour by other people, consequences of this problem can be diminished.
The term re-offend refers to the reiterating of a crime after experiencing the
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negative
consequences of it earlier. This practice is becoming a major issue of concern and there could be
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many
reasons underlying which will
be discussed
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thouroghly
along with the
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efective
solutions to mitigate this phenomenon.

To commence with the causes of re-offending, the
first
and foremost, poor environment of prisons, double prisoners than its capacity are
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kept
in a single cell and there are not even basic amenities for the criminals which
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make
them frustrated.
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Also
they are
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kept
regardless of their level of crime due to which circumstantial criminals
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get
exploited by the serious or brutal law-breakers.
Moreover
, loss of fear and respect, as a person who has
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came
from jail
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have to
face the relentless and disrespectful talks from the
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society
even if they
were declared
innocent.
As a result
they develop hatred among the
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society
and their fear of law and order diminishes which
further
leads them to perform illegal acts again.

However
, governing bodies and
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society
should adopt
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many
things which may be helpful to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
out of this predicament.
Firstly
, provision for rehabilitation
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centres
and incorporation of vocational courses in jails as it could instill various moral values in their minds which may encourage them not to break any law again.
In addition
to it, mankind should facilitate the
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people
who
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just
came from jail to cope up and to
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come
out of this dilemma.
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So
that, their mind become
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stable and
they may not strive to attempt any unlawful act
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in future
.

To summarize
, re-offend is cause of
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worry for
whole world which is
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arisinv
due to the worst environment rendered to the law breakers and exploitation from
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society
. Whereas by the adoption of such things like provision of moral values in cells and generous
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behaviour
by other
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people
, consequences of this problem can
be diminished
.
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IELTS essay Reoffend is common nowadays. Describe its various reasons and provide effective solutions to it

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