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RENTING HOUSE OR OWING BY YOURSELF ?

RENTING HOUSE OR OWING BY YOURSELF? VrAwm

Having a view that people have individual houses for themself is rather than renting ones. In fact, in some developing countries, this view is very important. It can show your financial resources or be your motivation. However, it also has drawbacks that the situation can know with many risks. besides, it can make negative conditions for some people. First of all, having a private house is one way to show your finances. It also demonstrates your social position. It is a good point that attracts someone in some special cases. Next, your own home can be your motivation in the future. Buying a house on hire - purchases will help you have a particular goal to work harder. You have an awareness of protecting, appreciate your home highly than renting ones. Furthermore, when you rent a home from strangers, it also has some secret that the host does not want you to know it. On the other hand, the negative of this statement should be mentioned right now. It very hard to have a private home, especially for adults from 20 - 30 years old. In this period of age, your financial resources do not enough to buy a high-quality house or you can waste your money to owning worse ones. By the way, you can have a difficulty in having a house in some developing countries. The price is costly. Whilst, renting ones will help you save money more effectively. In conclusion, although you rent or buy a house, it also has both sides for each other. but in my view, I prefer buying to other sites.

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people
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houses
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themself
 is rather
 than renting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
. In fact, in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
, this view is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
. It can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 your financial resources or be your motivation. However
, it also
 has drawbacks that the situation can know with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :hazardsdangers
risks
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBesides
besides
, it can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
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some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, having a private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 is one way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 your finances. It also
 demonstrates your social position. It is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 point that attracts someone in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 special cases. Next
, your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 home can be your motivation in the future. Buying a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 on hire Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.—
-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
purchases
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you have a particular goal to work harder. You have an awareness of protecting, appreciate your home Use "(highly)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(highly)
highly
 than renting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
. Furthermore
, when you rent a home from strangers, it also
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 secret that the host does not want you to know it.

On the other hand
, the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
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 right This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. It seems that a verb is missing.It isIt was
It
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to have a private home, especially
 for adults Nonstandard phrase. Did you mean: "from 20 to 30"?from 20 to 30
from 20 - 30
 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. In this period of age, your financial resources do not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a high-quality You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 or you can waste your money to owning worse You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
. By the way, you can have a difficulty in having a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
. The price is costly. Whilst, renting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsomeonewhoever
ones
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you save money more effectively
.

In conclusion
, although you rent or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingboxapartmentdwellingresidenceshack
house
, it also
 has both sides for each other. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterBut
but
 in my view, I prefer buying to other sites. 