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Regent Court to be redesigned as late-night food quarter

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The purpose of this report is to give an account of the outcomes of the recent town council meeting about the scheme to redesign the Regent Court as a late-night food quarter area. Around six people attended the meeting, including students, parents, a prospective owner of a restaurant, a local councillor and a local councillor for the Eco Party. This report summarizes the main arguments made during the meeting and concludes with some recommendations. Councillor Salvatierra began the meeting by summarizing some reasons for proposing the new area. With people nowadays buying through online websites more frequently, as a consequence quite a few shop units are empty. Therefore, opening restaurants in them will bring the town alive again. Mr. Mario, who is planning to open his restaurant there, claimed that this idea will help to bring more customers to the town. Mrs. Katerina, a student, agreed with him, adding that if she had the opportunity to choose, she would prefer to go out to eat rather than having to cook.
The purpose of this report is to give an account of the outcomes of the recent town council
meeting
about the scheme to redesign the Regent Court as a late-night food quarter area. Around six
people
attended the
meeting
, including students, parents, a prospective owner of a restaurant, a local councillor and a local councillor for the Eco Party. This report summarizes the main arguments made during the
meeting
and concludes with
some
recommendations.

Councillor
Salvatierra
began the
meeting
by summarizing
some
reasons for proposing the new area. With
people
nowadays buying through online websites more
frequently
, as a consequence quite a few shop units are empty.
Therefore
, opening restaurants in them will bring the town alive again. Mr. Mario, who is planning to open his restaurant there, claimed that this
idea
will
help
to bring more customers to the town. Mrs.
Katerina
, a student,
agreed
with him, adding that if she had the opportunity to choose, she would prefer to go out to eat
rather
than having to cook.
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IELTS essay Regent Court to be redesigned as late-night food quarter

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
170 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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