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Making a cup of tea is not that hard that we think.

Making a cup of tea is not that hard that we think. EwDpL
Most of us have never been in the kitchen and think that cooking and preparing anything could be really hard. But make a cup of tea is very simple and easy. Let me tell you how you can do that too. Firstly, take a look at what you need to have in order to make tea. You need a kettle, a gas stove, tea, cup, spoon, milk, sugar, and water. Depending on someone’s interest, they can put something else like honey too in the tea. Place the kettle in the stove and pour enough amount of water. Pour water according to how much tea exactly you need. Wait until the water gets boiled. I hope it will be boiled within a couple of minutes, depending on your stove hit. When the water gets boiled, you have to put some tea on the water. And then wait until the water becomes reddish color. When your water gets reddish that means the tea is ready. Now turn off your stove and serve the tea with honey, milk, sugar, or salt, depending on what you prefer to take.
Most of us have never been in the kitchen and
think
that cooking and preparing anything could be
really
hard
.
But
make
a cup of
tea
is
very
simple and easy.
Let
me
tell
you how you can do that too.

Firstly
, take a look at what you need to have in order to
make
tea
. You need a kettle, a gas
stove
,
tea
, cup, spoon, milk, sugar, and
water
. Depending on someone’s interest, they can put something else like honey too in the tea.

Place the kettle in the
stove
and pour
enough
amount of
water
. Pour
water
according to how much
tea
exactly you need. Wait until the
water
gets
boiled. I hope it will
be boiled
within a couple of minutes, depending on your
stove
hit. When the
water
gets
boiled, you
have to
put
some
tea
on the water.

And then wait until the
water
becomes reddish color.
When
your
water
gets
reddish that means the
tea
is ready.
Now
turn off your
stove
and serve the
tea
with honey, milk, sugar, or salt, depending on what you prefer to take.
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IELTS essay Making a cup of tea is not that hard that we think.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
185 words
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