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Describe a place where you want to visit

Describe a place where you want to visit 2RyYA
Well, today I would like to talk about foreign countries which I want visit. Actually, I want visit to every modern and historic places, however it is impossible thus I have plan to travel one very touristic country which is extremely famous with their climate. This country as named Switzerland. Initially, I am keen on this country, since Switzerland's mountains, climate as well as houses which is the located near mountains very like to me. In addition, imagine houses which is close by forests and you can see these houses only in Switzerland. It should be highlighted that, their road not only amazing but also like the paths in fairy tales too. To sum up, nowadays I began raise money for travelling this unique country and if I earn enough money. Absolutely I will go this unprecedented country
Well,
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today
I would like to talk about foreign
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countries
which I want visit. Actually, I want visit to every modern and historic places,
however
it is impossible
thus
I have plan to travel one
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very
touristic
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country
which is
extremely
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famous
with their climate. This
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country
as named Switzerland.

Initially
, I am keen on this
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country
, since Switzerland's mountains, climate
as well
as
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houses
which is the located near mountains
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very
like to me.
In addition
, imagine
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houses
which is close by forests and you can
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see
these
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houses
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only
in Switzerland. It should
be highlighted
that, their road not
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only
amazing
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but
also
like the paths in fairy tales too.

To sum up, nowadays I began raise money for travelling this unique
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country
and if I earn
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enough
money.
Absolutely
I will go this unprecedented
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country
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IELTS essay Describe a place where you want to visit

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
137 words
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