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Describe a place where you want to visit

Describe a place where you want to visit 2RyYA

Well, today I would like to talk about foreign countries which I want visit. Actually, I want visit to every modern and historic places, however it is impossible thus I have plan to travel one very touristic country which is extremely famous with their climate. This country as named Switzerland. Initially, I am keen on this country, since Switzerland's mountains, climate as well as houses which is the located near mountains very like to me. In addition, imagine houses which is close by forests and you can see these houses only in Switzerland. It should be highlighted that, their road not only amazing but also like the paths in fairy tales too. To sum up, nowadays I began raise money for travelling this unique country and if I earn enough money. Absolutely I will go this unprecedented country

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