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Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that the authorities’ roles in minimizing global environmental damage negate those of individuals. However, I think that it is the responsibility of both governments and individuals. It is true that some environmental issues are beyond the capability of individuals. In order for a comprehensive environmental conservation, it is the role of governments to propose long-term solutions to such issues as global warming, deforestation, or extreme weather. This is because solving such problems requires the use of up-to-date technological devices and large numbers of experienced scientists to work together. Besides suggesting solutions to surmount such problems, it is crucial that the governments put forward environmental planning for sustainable development. For instance, the authorities should set limits on the use of fossil fuels and seek for alternative sources of energy such as wind power, water power or solar power. Since these activities demand a lot of time and budgets, only governments can have sufficient funds and resources to invest in them. . However, I believe that individuals also need to get involved in environmental preservation. Only by the approval and adherence of the citizens to the governments’ environmental policies do the undertakings of governments become effective. For example, if farmers continued to burn forests for agricultural land regardless of the regulations of the governments, there would be little likelihood that global warming is successfully mitigated. Thus, the cooperation of both politicians and individuals is needed. As individuals, there are various ways to contribute to reducing global environmental damage, such as recycling, replacing the use of traditional energy by using energy-efficient and eco-friendly household items or planting more trees. In conclusion, I believe that governments should be closely associated with individuals in coping with global environmental issues.
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is believed
that the authorities’ roles in minimizing
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global
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damage negate those of
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individuals
.
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, I
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think
that it is the responsibility of both
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governments
and individuals.

It is true that
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some
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environmental
issues are beyond the capability of
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individuals
. In order for a comprehensive
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environmental
conservation, it is the role of
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governments
to propose long-term solutions to such issues as
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global
warming, deforestation, or extreme weather. This is
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because
solving such problems requires the
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use
of up-to-date technological devices and large numbers of experienced scientists to work together.
Besides
suggesting solutions to surmount such problems, it is crucial that the
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governments
put forward
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environmental
planning for sustainable development.
For instance
, the authorities should set limits on the
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use
of fossil fuels and seek for alternative sources of energy such as wind power, water power or solar power. Since these activities demand
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a lot of
time and budgets,
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only
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governments
can have sufficient funds and resources to invest in them.
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However
, I believe that
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individuals
also
need to
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get
involved in
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preservation.
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Only
by the approval and adherence of the citizens to the
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governments’
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environmental
policies do the undertakings of
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governments
become effective.
For example
, if farmers continued to burn forests for agricultural land regardless of the regulations of the
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governments
, there would be
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little
likelihood that
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global
warming is
successfully
mitigated.
Thus
, the cooperation of both politicians and
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individuals
is needed
. As
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individuals
, there are various ways to contribute to reducing
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global
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environmental
damage, such as recycling, replacing the
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use
of traditional energy by using energy-efficient and eco-friendly household items or planting more trees.

In conclusion
, I believe that
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governments
should be
closely
associated with
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individuals
in coping with
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global
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environmental
issues.
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IELTS essay Reducing global environmental damage should be handled by governments rather than individuals.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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