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Reduce consumption of fuel resources by increasing the rate of fuel

Reduce consumption of fuel resources by increasing the rate of fuel ndgdE
In today's contemporary era, it is rare to find the country who is untouched with the problem of fuel consumption, its presence can be felt in all over the world across evry nation and community. Some people suggest that increase in rate of fuel can only be the solution. There are numerous reasons in support of this view. Firstly, people who are using personal mode of transportaion for just comfortness will be stopped. The price of fuel will be over budget for them. Secondly, people will move toward the public transport. At the end, it will be helpful in saving the environment as well as fuel. Thirdly human being will prefer to walk for nearer destinations. furthermore it will increase the proportion of users of bicyles. This will lead to reduction in air pollution also. In addtion to that, economy of nation will increased due to maximum use of public transportaion and due to higher charges on fuel. On the other hand, many humankind are using personal vehicle because of few or no transportation facilities to thier destionation and for them it will be a huge drawback. Moreover, for poor people it will be hard to use thier personal mode of transportation. Public will go against the ruling goverment due to higher charges on fuel resources. Some countries which are not economically stable, for them such kind of steps for reducing the use of fuel is not possible. the rate of toursm will also got effected by the greater intensity on the price of petrol and diesel. All in all, looking at advantages and disadvantages of higher charges on fuel, I firmly believe that it will a tremendous benefit because it has more pros than cons.
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today
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fuel
consumption, its presence can
be felt
in all over the world across
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evry
nation and community.

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Some
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people
suggest that increase in rate of
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fuel
can
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only
be the solution. There are numerous reasons in support of this view.
Firstly
,
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people
who are using personal mode of
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transportaion
for
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just
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comfortness
will be
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stopped
. The price of
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fuel
will be over budget for them.
Secondly
,
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people
will
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move
toward the public transport. At the
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end
, it will be helpful in saving the environment
as well
as
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fuel
.
Thirdly
human being will prefer to walk for nearer destinations.
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furthermore
it will increase the proportion of users of
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bicyles
. This will lead to reduction in air pollution
also
. In
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addtion
to that, economy of nation will
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increased
due to maximum
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use
of public
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transportaion
and due to higher charges on fuel.

On the other hand
,
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many humankind
are using personal vehicle
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because
of few or no transportation facilities to
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thier
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destionation
and for them it will be a huge drawback.
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, for poor
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people
it will be
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hard
to
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use
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thier
personal mode of transportation. Public will go against the ruling
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goverment
due to higher charges on
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fuel
resources.
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Some
countries which are not
economically
stable, for them such kind of steps for reducing the
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use
of
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fuel
is not possible.
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the
rate of
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toursm
will
also
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got
effected by the greater intensity on the price of petrol and diesel.

All in all, looking at advantages and disadvantages of higher charges on
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fuel
, I
firmly
believe that it will a tremendous benefit
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because
it has more pros than cons.
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IELTS essay Reduce consumption of fuel resources by increasing the rate of fuel

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4 paragraphs
286 words
5.5
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