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Recently you had a holiday overseas and you stay with a family member who has sent you a letter and some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your family member -thanks for the photos and for the holiday -explain why you did not send a letter -invite v.2

Recently you had a holiday overseas and you stay with a family member who has sent you a letter and some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your family member -thanks for the photos and for the holiday -explain why you did not send a letter -invite v. 2
Dear John, I hope you' re doing well. I' ve just received your letter along with a few photos that were clicked during my trip with you in Toronto. I' m very thankful to you to make this trip wonderful by showing me spectacular places, and for the hospitality that I got from you and other family members. Also, I was engrossed into past memories by watching these amazing photos and selfies. Please accept my apologies for not contacting you earlier. Actually, after coming back, I got involved in the business project that I mention to you when we went to eat out at ' The Grill' restaurant. But now I' m fully free, so without wasting any time, I' m replying to you. In the upcoming month, due to the off-season in my business, I' d have plenty of time, thus, why don' t you plan to visit India? In fact, I have a spare bedroom at my home that would be suitable for your stay. Please let me know about your plans. Eagerly waiting for your reply. Your cousin, Dheeraj
Dear John,

I hope
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re doing
well.
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I&
#039; ve
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just
received your letter along with a few photos that
were clicked
during my trip with you in Toronto.
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I&
#039; m
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very
thankful to you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
this trip wonderful by showing me spectacular places, and for the hospitality that I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
from you and other family members.
Also
, I
was engrossed
into
Consider using "memories".
past memories
by watching these amazing photos and selfies.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
accept my apologies for not contacting you earlier. Actually, after coming back, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
involved in the business project that I mention to you when we went to eat out at ' The
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Grill&
#039; restaurant.
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But
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now
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I&
#039; m
fully
free,
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so
without wasting any time,
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I&
#039; m replying to you.

In the upcoming month, due to the off-season in my business,
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I&
#039; d have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of time,
thus
, why
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don&
#039; t you plan to visit India? In fact, I have a spare bedroom at my home that would be suitable for your stay.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know about your plans.

Eagerly
waiting for your reply.

Your cousin,

Dheeraj
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes
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IELTS essay Recently you had a holiday overseas and you stay with a family member who has sent you a letter and some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your family member -thanks for the photos and for the holiday -explain why you did not send a letter -invite v. 2

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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