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Recently you had a holiday overseas and you stay with a family member who has sent you a letter and some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your family member -thanks for the photos and for the holiday -explain why you did not send a letter -invite v.2

Recently you had a holiday overseas and you stay with a family member who has sent you a letter and some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your family member -thanks for the photos and for the holiday -explain why you did not send a letter -invite v. 2
Dear John, I hope you' re doing well. I' ve just received your letter along with a few photos that were clicked during my trip with you in Toronto. I' m very thankful to you to make this trip wonderful by showing me spectacular places, and for the hospitality that I got from you and other family members. Also, I was engrossed into past memories by watching these amazing photos and selfies. Please accept my apologies for not contacting you earlier. Actually, after coming back, I got involved in the business project that I mention to you when we went to eat out at ' The Grill' restaurant. But now I' m fully free, so without wasting any time, I' m replying to you. In the upcoming month, due to the off-season in my business, I' d have plenty of time, thus, why don' t you plan to visit India? In fact, I have a spare bedroom at my home that would be suitable for your stay. Please let me know about your plans. Eagerly waiting for your reply. Your cousin, Dheeraj
Dear John,

I hope
you&
#039;
re doing
well.
I&
#039; ve
just
received your letter along with a few photos that
were clicked
during my trip with you in Toronto.
I&
#039; m
very
thankful to you to
make
this trip wonderful by showing me spectacular places, and for the hospitality that I
got
from you and other family members.
Also
, I
was engrossed
into
past memories
by watching these amazing photos and selfies.

Please
accept my apologies for not contacting you earlier. Actually, after coming back, I
got
involved in the business project that I mention to you when we went to eat out at ' The
Grill&
#039; restaurant.
But
now
I&
#039; m
fully
free,
so
without wasting any time,
I&
#039; m replying to you.

In the upcoming month, due to the off-season in my business,
I&
#039; d have
plenty
of time,
thus
, why
don&
#039; t you plan to visit India? In fact, I have a spare bedroom at my home that would be suitable for your stay.
Please
let
me know about your plans.

Eagerly
waiting for your reply.

Your cousin,

Dheeraj
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS essay Recently you had a holiday overseas and you stay with a family member who has sent you a letter and some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your family member -thanks for the photos and for the holiday -explain why you did not send a letter -invite v. 2

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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