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Recently people know only few of their relatives what are the reason and solutions

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individuals their 28 the
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familias
recent times, majority
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small
the
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neighbours
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Due
busy in communicate with unknowns. This of the number lifestyle
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People
and essay will
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discuss about the
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eloisons
of the
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scime
and Provides solutions to the problem.
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begin
with, nowadays towards have living unable
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of
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developing cities.
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good
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Isfestyle
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due
to be nearest are busy which they with strangers.
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Pecople
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migeady
in order
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which they in
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conted
with the
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there
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house
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crime
incidents work or
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studier
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many
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individu
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due
to for communication major
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reve
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incleciting
nowadays
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10 which
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people
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faces
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difficmetty
trusting them
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neighbours
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home
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relation with them.
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for
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won the Person living their
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buch
of
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the their neighbow
are
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neighbours
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People
should
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ussit
Communicate them and introduce themselves
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arder
to
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maintour
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good
relations.
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individuals
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neighbours
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IELTS essay Recently people know only few of their relatives what are the reason and solutions

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
184 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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