Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

When You Rediscover Your Creative Genius It’s a Beautiful Moment

When You Rediscover Your Creative Genius It’s a Beautiful Moment k5DlO
It’s time for a wild ride. She walks out onto the stage in front of a crowded theatre audience. She looks healthy and normal. When asked to describe the song she’s about to sing, these words leave her mouth effortlessly: “It’s the story of my last year of life. ” The song is called *It’s Okay. * She hasn’t sung recently. She then explains “I have not been working for quite a few years. I’ve been dealing with cancer. Last time I checked I had some cancer in my lungs and my spine and my liver. ” An audience member asks, “So you’re not okay? ” “Not in every way, no. It’s important that everyone knows I’m so much more than the bad things that happen to me. ” “You can’t wait until life isn’t hard anymore, before you decide to be happy. ” The words of the song spill into the microphone and out through the speakers as creative energy. The song ends. There is complete silence. Shortly after, there is a loud roar and a standing ovation in a sold-out theatre and in front of millions of Youtube viewers. She walks off the stage and records a short interview. What she says is completely unexpected. “I have a 2% chance of survival … but 2% is not 0%. 2% is something. And I wish people knew how amazing it is. ” [At the beginning of the performance](https: //www. youtube. com/watch? v=CZJvBfoHDk0) she says the song is the story of her last year of life. She meant that statement *literally*. This is her last year of life as a 30-year-old singer. She didn’t want to waste any more of her creative genius. Even with the worst news imaginable, she started a Youtube channel and began unleashing her creative genius before her short 30 years on Earth is over. I sat there with tears in my eyes thinking about this beautiful moment. Creative genius is so important and a lot of us waste it.
It’s time for a wild ride.

She walks out onto the stage in front of a crowded
Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.
theatre
audience. She looks healthy and normal. When asked to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
describe
the song she’s about to sing, these words
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
leave
her mouth
effortlessly
: “It’s the story of my last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. ”

The song
is called
 *It’s Okay. * She hasn’t sung recently.

She then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explains
“I have not been working for quite a few years. I’ve been dealing with cancer. Last time I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
I had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
cancer in my lungs and my spine and my liver. ”

An audience member asks, “
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
you’re not okay? ”

“Not in every way, no. It’s
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
that everyone knows I’m
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much more than the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
things that happen to me. ”

“You can’t wait until
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
isn’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
anymore,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
you decide to be happy. ”

The words of the song spill into the microphone and out through the speakers as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
creative
energy. The song ends. There is complete silence.

Shortly after, there is a loud roar and a standing ovation in a sold-out
Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.
theatre
and in front of millions of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Youtube
viewers. She walks off the stage and records a short interview. What she says is completely unexpected.

“I have a 2% chance of survival …
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
2% is not 0%. 2% is something. And I wish
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
knew how amazing it is. ”

[At the beginning of the performance](
Possible spelling mistake found.
https
: //
Possible spelling mistake found.
www
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
youtube
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
com
/
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
?
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
v
=CZJvBfoHDk0) she says the song is the story of her last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. She meant that statement *literall
Replace by the typographical symbol.
y*.
This is her last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
year
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
as a 30-year-
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
singer.

She didn’t want to waste any more of her
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
creative
genius. Even with the worst news imaginable, she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
a
Possible spelling mistake found.
Youtube
channel and began unleashing her
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
creative
genius
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
her short 30 years on Earth is over.

I sat there with tears in my eyes thinking about this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
moment.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Creative
genius is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
us waste it.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay When You Rediscover Your Creative Genius It’s a Beautiful Moment

Essay
  American English
13 paragraphs
330 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts