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Recently, genetically modified food has become a new solution to agriculture productivity. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages v.1

Recently, genetically modified food has become a new solution to agriculture productivity. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages v. 1
For many people, the inborn character and life experience are considered to have a major impact by personage than other tasks being performed. This essay will discuss about why personality has more influence on our life. I personally believe that attributes lead a person to act in a distinct way. Across the world, personality is the determinants of major broad heads. Firstly, a person belongs to distinct background and follows a unique culture along with faces various challenges throughout the life, while the impact distinguishes him, when he visits at a place belongs to different code of conduct. For instance, considering a person belongs to Punjab, Pakistan, who is attending the wedding ceremony in the UK. The way he speaks, wears dress code or behaves with guests, this will totally represent his history, image that a person belongs from. Consequently, the environment, living criteria being taught and implemented illustrates his attributes. Furthermore, there are also multiple other reasons behind the influence. Firstly, many people adopt various forms of representations. Most of the times a person belongs to different places, but spends maximum time at the distinct place, which is caused by studies, job or any other reasons of career or family. Therefore, environment of concerned area creates a change in a form of habits and living. For example, considering a person belongs to Unites States of America, who is currently living in Pakistan, where everything is entirely different. He has adopted some changes and looks like real Pakistani. Consequently, the personality of an individual is affected by the current environment irrespective of background. In conclusion, the personality portrays the dignity of an individual. I am convinced that attribute leads a person towards distinguishing manner of his life and career.
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experience
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being performed
. This essay will
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discuss about why
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personality
has more influence on our
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life
. I
personally
believe that attributes lead a
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person
to act
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in a distinct way
.

Across the world,
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personality
is the determinants of major broad heads.
Firstly
, a
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person
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belongs
to distinct background and follows a unique culture along with faces various challenges throughout the
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life
, while the impact distinguishes him, when he visits at a place
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belongs
to
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different
code of conduct.
For instance
, considering a
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person
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belongs
to Punjab, Pakistan, who is attending the wedding ceremony in the UK. The way he speaks, wears dress code or behaves with guests, this will
totally
represent his history, image that a
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person
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belongs
from.
Consequently
, the environment, living criteria
being taught
and implemented illustrates his attributes.

Furthermore
, there are
also
multiple other reasons behind the influence.
Firstly
,
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people
adopt various forms of representations.
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a
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belongs
to
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different
places,
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spends maximum time at the distinct place, which
is caused
by studies, job or any other reasons of career or family.
Therefore
, environment of concerned area creates a
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change
in a form of habits and living.
For example
, considering a
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person
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belongs
to
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Unites
States of America, who is
currently
living in Pakistan, where everything is
entirely
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different
. He has adopted
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some
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changes
and looks like real Pakistani.
Consequently
, the
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personality
of an individual is
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affected
by the
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current
environment irrespective of background.

In conclusion
, the
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personality
portrays the dignity of an individual. I
am convinced
that attribute leads a
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person
towards distinguishing manner of his
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life
and career.
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IELTS essay Recently, genetically modified food has become a new solution to agriculture productivity. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
289 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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