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Recently abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal. While others are against it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Nowadays, abortion has become a trend in some countries but in others, it takes as serious offence. In the following essay, we will discuss about both of the view points and conclude it. Firstly some people think that abortion should be legal because it will give the right to their child to avoid unwanted pregnancy. Then they can save themselves from such responsibilities that can ruin their future. Moreover, during some pregnancies, some babies face the serious health injuries that can also cause mother’s health. In such cases, it results a mother’s death or mentally trauma. Furthermore, abortion can also help to control the population.

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