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received a lot of attention over the last decade as one

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It would be wrong to say that …. . Has not received a lot of attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society. In this article, I try to introduce …. . as the main cause of this phenomenon, then go on to suggest ……. . as the logical solution. Some people take the view that ……. . As opposed to this way of thinking, there are others who believe vice versa. These points will be explained in this following paragraphs in order to draw a conclusion. As a matter of fact, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with There are many aspects about the mentioned matter The first thing I want to talk about is related to…. . To provide more explanation, I should say that…. . In addition to this, it is good to point out …. . As far as purpose of this letter is concerned, I should say that ….
It would be
wrong
to say that ….
.


Has not received
a lot of
attention over the last decade as one of the most significant issues in society.

In this article, I try to introduce ….
.
as
the main cause of this phenomenon, then go on to suggest …….
.
as
the logical solution.

Some
people
take the view that …….
.


As opposed to this way of thinking, there are others who believe vice versa.

These points will be
explained
in this following paragraphs in order to draw a conclusion.

As a matter of fact, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with

There are
many
aspects about the mentioned matter The
first
thing I want to talk about
is related
to….
.


To provide more explanation, I should say that….
.


In addition
to this, it is
good
to point out ….
.


As far as purpose of this letter
is concerned
, I should say that ….
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IELTS essay received a lot of attention over the last decade as one

Essay
  American English
11 paragraphs
163 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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