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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT TO SOLVE THE TRAFFIC CONGESTION IS TO INCREASE TAX BUT OTHER DISAGREE. DISCUSS BOTH AND GIVE OPINION

SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT TO SOLVE THE TRAFFIC CONGESTION IS TO INCREASE TAX BUT OTHER DISAGREE. DISCUSS BOTH AND GIVE OPINION qV09d

It is true that to impose additional tax on private vehicles is one of the way to demotivated to purchase private car that has significant impact on traffic jam. There are another two vital reasons are increasing living standard and relocation of population. In the one hand, people who are staying in developing countries like Bangladesh where Dhaka is the main hub of the country. Here living standard of the people is becoming upgraded and they prefer to own their cars. Sometimes, we noticed more than one car is being used for a single family. Presently, Government imposed two hundred percent tax in case of purchase a new car but it cannot stop the buying tendency because of the buying capacity that is skyscrapers. So, high income level may plays a crucial role in this case. On the other hand, due to urbanization, more people are intended to come the capital city. The reason behind this situation, lots of industries and business hub is being situated over there. So, to find the employment opportunity, rural people are migrating in to the urban areas where more transportation is required to facilitate themselves. Though public transportation system is not up to the mark, so people's are willing to buy a car for themselves, and this is caused for traffic jam which is on of the burning issue. To sum up, government may get benefited by imposing tax but it cannot help to reduce traffic jam due to many adjacent factors.

It is true that to impose additional tax on private vehicles is one of the way to demotivated to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 private You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 that has significant impact on traffic jam. There are another two vital reasons are increasing living standard and relocation of population.

In the one hand, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who are staying in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
 like Bangladesh where Dhaka is the main hub of the country. Here living standard of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 is becoming Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).upgraded, and
upgraded and
 they prefer to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
Sometimes
, we noticed more than one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 is being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for a single family. Presently
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
 imposed two hundred percent tax in case of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 a new You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 the buying tendency This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the buying capacity that is
 skyscrapers. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, high income level may plays a crucial role in this case
.

On the other hand
, due to urbanization, more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
are intended
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 the capital city. The reason behind this situation, lots of industries and business hub is being situated
 over there. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, to find the employment opportunity, rural You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 are migrating in to the urban areas where more transportation is required
 to facilitate themselves. Though public transportation system is not up to the mark, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's are willing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 for themselves, and this is caused
 for traffic jam which is on of the burning issue.

To sum up, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 benefited by imposing tax This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 traffic jam due to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 adjacent factors. 