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Reasons to Love My Smartphone

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I have a fast smartphone that I like it too much. First, My smartphone makes my life so easy because it arranges my due dates and reminds me early before every once to be ready. Second, it is saving my times and my money which is an amazing thing about my cell phone. My mobile gives me the ability to scan any important document at any time in any situation in any place and save it as a PDF file. I am obsessed with the phone, so I never leave my home without it.
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smartphone that I like it too much.
First
, My smartphone
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makes
my life
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so
easy
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it arranges my due dates and reminds me early
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every once to be ready. Second, it is saving my times and my money which is an amazing thing about my cell phone. My mobile gives me the ability to scan any
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important
document at any time in any situation in any place and save it as a PDF file. I
am obsessed
with the phone,
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so
I never
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my home without it.
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IELTS essay Reasons to Love My Smartphone

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
94 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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