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In September 2018, my father had to go on a business in China, and I had a chance to come with him. Only be seen a part of China at that time, but I saw that it was much more developed than Vietnam. I thought why there was a difference like that, and asked my father for an answer; and he told me that “ There were various ways to make that difference, if you are curious about that, you have to find out yourself. I used to be like you when I was young, and I was found my passion in my current job. ” Those words of my father inspired my burning passion so much, and since then, I have hoped that I could do a job that is meaningful like my father. After that, when I’m a high school student, my teachers taught me lots of subjects, and I frequently have good marks in social subjects like geography, history. But I still could not be learned details about how Vietnam’s neighboring countries can develop quickly like what I want to know. However, I kept learning not only about ASEAN but also China, Japan, and some developed countries in Asia, from books, the internet, and from my father. I also attend most of online events about policies or information about countries if I can.
In September 2018, my
father
had to go on a business in China, and I had a chance to
come
with him.
Only
be
seen
a part of China at that time,
but
I
saw
that it was much more developed than Vietnam. I
thought
why there was a difference like that, and asked my
father
for an answer; and he
told
me that
There were various ways to
make
that difference, if you are curious about that, you
have to
find out yourself. I
used
to be like you when I was young, and I
was found
my passion in my
current
job. ” Those words of my
father
inspired my burning passion
so
much, and since then, I have hoped that I could do a job
that is
meaningful like my
father
. After that, when I’m a high school student, my teachers taught me lots of subjects, and I
frequently
have
good
marks in social subjects like geography, history.
But
I
still
could not
be learned
details
about how Vietnam’s neighboring countries can develop
quickly
like what I want to know.
However
, I
kept
learning not
only
about ASEAN
but
also
China, Japan, and
some
developed countries
in Asia, from books, the internet, and from my
father
. I
also
attend most of online
events
about policies or information about countries if I can.
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IELTS essay reason why you choose crps

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
226 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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