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Give your opinion on News paper

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Newspapers are one of the most important documents. They can be said to be the powerhouse of information. Moreover, they offer us other benefits as well which helps us in our lives. You become better informed through newspaper reading and it also broadens your perspective. However, newspaper reading is becoming a dying habit. As the world is moving towards digitalization, no one really reads the newspaper. At least not the present generation. The readership is maintained mostly because of the older generations only.
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be said
to be the powerhouse of information.
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which
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helps
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. You become better informed through
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newspaper
reading and it
also
broadens your perspective.
However
,
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newspaper
reading is becoming a dying habit. As the world is moving towards digitalization, no one
really
reads the
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newspaper
. At least not the present generation. The readership
is maintained
mostly
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because
of the older generations
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IELTS essay Give your opinion on News paper

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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