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Reading is the best way to gain knowledge

Reading is the best way to gain knowledge E7N5b
Reading is the best way to gain knowledge and make teenagers more intelligent. With the technology development, the young seem to forget to read books and articles at least two times a week. Instead, their preference is to use the internet like Facebook for virtual living purposes. As you know, reading has played an essential and beneficial in human’s life up to now. Firstly, books have been recognized by most of the siencetists as an inexhaustible treasure trove of knowledge. The historical, geological, cultural books, etc encourage readers improve their understanding of social development. Secondly, reading can enhance teenagers’ concentration and analytical skills. During the reading process, they just focus on the plot and content of books, so their memory can be improved effectively. Finally, spending time reading books also helps them release tension. In the library, they can choose a funny book, then enjoy the private space with a lot of laughs, or motivational books support them to forget the pressures in their current life and find the best way to cope with problems.
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is the best way to gain knowledge and
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make
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teenagers
more intelligent. With the technology development, the young seem to forget to read
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books
and articles at least two times a week.
Instead
, their preference is to
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use
the internet like Facebook for virtual living purposes. As you know,
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reading
has played an essential and beneficial in human’s life up to
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now
.
Firstly
,
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have
been recognized
by most of the
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siencetists
as an inexhaustible treasure trove of knowledge. The historical, geological, cultural
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books
, etc encourage readers
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improve
their understanding of social development.
Secondly
,
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reading
can enhance
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teenagers
’ concentration and analytical
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skills
. During the
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reading
process, they
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just
focus on the plot and content of
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books
,
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so
their memory can be
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improved
effectively
.
Finally
, spending time
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reading
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books
also
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helps
them release tension. In the library, they can choose a
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funny
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book
, then enjoy the private space with
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a lot of
laughs, or motivational
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books
support them to forget the pressures in their
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current
life and find the best way to cope with problems.
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IELTS essay Reading is the best way to gain knowledge

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
175 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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