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Reading fiction, such as short stories and novels, is more fun than watching a movie. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Reading fiction, such as short stories and novels, is more fun than watching a movie. 26BNX
Access to the multiple things in daily life is giving more fun when it comes to reading a fabulous novels or books, listening to your favourite music, watching movies with your friends and much more. Readers reading fictions like storybooks, novels, journals etc. will have a lot of excitement. Reading such books make readers jovial. But my vote will go towards watching movies rather than reading fictions. The facts and example will be presented to support my viewpoint. Humans prefer to lean towards watching something instead of reading the same if possible. There is a huge memory portion in our brain which is occupied for what are we watching, what are we listening, what are we reading and many more. Those activities have separate memory spaces in our brain to memorise that particular event. When we are watching something it become very easy to remember it for longer duration of time. Reading a same book all over time is now become burden to so many people of our country. They are preferring to go and watch same content movie in a theatre and to relax for a while. In addition to the above paragraph, the entertainment world has now reached the summit of success. Many mind blowing TV shows and movies have produced by directors and production team. They are on the urge of creating fanbase of their movie and literally they touched the sky for the same. For instance, the very famous person “George R. R. Martin” author of a book named “Game of thrones” was one of the best book of all time and recognized by many great authors and the citizens of our country too. After a few years later, it was characterized in the form of television series (movie) and got billions of views. People just loved this show and made high standards in the entertainment industry. Conversely, now a days movies which were translated from well-known novels, are added with violent scenes and sexual contents. This gives false impression to the audience and couldn’t able to explain the main gist which is written down in such books. Also, reading is more helpful to become successful. Many great leaders and higher authorities of any reputed multinational company are readers. People can find peace by reading novels. There is chunk of people in one particular community still like to read. To conclude, though reading is powerful tool to stretch out your mind and to think in different perspectives watching movies is now become a healthy trend and gives so much fun and excitement.
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to
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reading
a fabulous
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novels
or
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books
, listening to your
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favourite
music, watching
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movies
with your friends and much more. Readers
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reading
fictions like storybooks,
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novels
, journals etc. will have
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a lot of
excitement.
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Reading
such
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books
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make
readers jovial.
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But
my vote will go towards watching
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movies
rather
than
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reading
fictions. The facts and example will
be presented
to support my viewpoint.

Humans prefer to lean towards watching something
instead
of
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reading
the same if possible. There is a huge memory portion in our brain which
is occupied
for what are we watching, what are we listening, what are we
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reading
and
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many
more. Those activities have separate memory spaces in our brain to
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memorise
that particular
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event
. When we are watching something it
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become
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very
easy to remember it for longer duration of time.
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Reading
a same
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book
all over time is
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now
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become
burden to
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so
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many
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people
of our country. They
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are preferring
to go and
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watch
same content
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movie
in a
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theatre
and to relax for a while.

In addition
to the above paragraph, the entertainment world has
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now
reached the summit of success.
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Many
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mind blowing
TV
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shows
and
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movies
have produced by directors and production team. They are on the urge of creating
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fanbase
of their
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movie
and
literally
they touched the sky for the same.
For instance
, the
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very
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famous
person “George R. R. Martin” author of a
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book
named “
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Game of thrones
” was one of the best
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book
of all time and recognized by
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many
great authors and the citizens of our country too. After a few years later, it
was characterized
in the form of television series
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(movie)
and
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got
billions of views.
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People
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just
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loved
this
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show
and made high standards in the entertainment industry.

Conversely
,
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now a days
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movies
which
were translated
from well-known
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novels
, are
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added
with violent scenes and sexual contents. This gives false impression to the audience and couldn’t able to
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explain
the main gist which
is written
down in such
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books
.
Also
,
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reading
is more helpful to
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become
successful.
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Many
great leaders and higher authorities of any reputed multinational
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company
are readers.
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People
can find peace by
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reading
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
novels
. There is chunk of
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people
in one particular community
still
like to read.

To conclude
, though
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reading
is powerful tool to stretch out your mind and to
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think
in
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different
perspectives watching
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movies
is
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now
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become
a healthy trend and gives
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so
much fun and excitement.
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IELTS essay Reading fiction, such as short stories and novels, is more fun than watching a movie.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
426 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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