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Women should not have a right to abortion because of the negative effects it has on society. Ending the fetus’s life might be a norm in certain regions, but there is not much to applaud about it.

Women should not have a right to abortion because of the negative effects it has on society. Ending the fetus’s life might be a norm in certain regions, but there is not much to applaud about it. BYVea
Women should not have a right to abortion because of the negative effects it has on society. Ending the fetus’s life might be a norm in certain regions, but there is not much to applaud about it. Individuals advocating for abortion are the ones who may benefit from it indirectly. However, people in power should act promptly to provide regulations that will protect the life of unborn babies. Foremost, abortion could lead to reproductive dysfunction in women (Vivanco, 2020). Induced miscarriage may lead to psychological conditioning in which the woman may not conceive again. Such a case is likely to wreak havoc in a relationship. Sometimes, medical advice to end life may be considered to save the mother. Secondly, abortion should not be allowed because it is misogynistic and portrays women in a negative light. However, such acts are not consensual even if the women encounter cases such as rape (Anderson, 2017). Usually, they are forced into immoral activities because of challenging life circumstances, and most of them would instead not take part in such demeaning acts. Hence, killing an innocent human can be termed murder and should face the hands of the law. In summary, abortion should be outrightly banned, as it has negative impacts on society. The end of innocent life is a wrong image of sexual relations, particularly for teenagers whose minds are still malleable. Hence, it is necessary to ban untimely birth to protect women from having their lives ruined. The government should put in place laws that restrict pregnancy termination and fine victims vast sums of money. Abortion is an immoral act and should not be allowed to women.
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effects it has on society. Ending the fetus’s
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there is not much to applaud about it. Individuals advocating for
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abortion
are the ones who may benefit from it
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people
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of unborn babies.

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could lead to reproductive dysfunction in
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women
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, 2020). Induced miscarriage may lead to psychological conditioning in which the woman may not conceive again. Such a case is likely to wreak havoc in a relationship.
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because
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women
in a
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light.
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acts
are not consensual even if the
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women
encounter cases such as rape (Anderson, 2017).
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circumstances, and most of them would
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take part
in such demeaning
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acts
.
Hence
, killing an innocent human can
be termed
murder and should face the hands of the law.

In summary,
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abortion
should be
outrightly
banned, as it has
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negative
impacts on society. The
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end
of innocent
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wrong
image of sexual relations,
particularly
for
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teenagers
whose minds are
still
malleable.
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untimely
birth to protect
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women
from having their
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lives
ruined. The
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government
should put in place laws that restrict pregnancy termination and fine victims vast sums of money.
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Abortion
is an immoral
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act
and should not be
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women
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IELTS essay Women should not have a right to abortion because of the negative effects it has on society. Ending the fetus’s life might be a norm in certain regions, but there is not much to applaud about it.

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274 words
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