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Climate change represents a major threat to the lives of the people. But, some people argued that we should make a habit to live with this climate change.

Climate change represents a major threat to the lives of the people. But, some people argued that we should make a habit to live with this climate change. kb8nM
Climate change represents a major threat to the lives of the people. But, some people argued that we should make a habit to live with this climate change. I completely disagree with this opinion and I think, there is ample time to tackle climate change. Firstly, there are various measures that government and individuals should implement to eradicate the changes. There should be strict laws and rules regarding water and air pollution, and one should pay heavy fines if found abolishing these laws. We should invest in renewable energy sources like air, water, wind, and solar for the production of power. There should be some restrictions on the airlines because they have a lot of carbon dioxide emissions. As an individual, we should also try to limit carbon dioxide by using public transport and also bicycles rather than using our vehicle around the city. If this method is adopted, we can have a significant decline in global warming and air pollution. However, it also reduces fuel consumption and fuel cost. If instead of taking the above-mentioned measures we simply try to live with this climate change, I believe it has the most harmful consequences. For example, if there is even a small rise in the sea levels, most low-lying areas have gone flooding. Millions of people would lose their shelter and there is gonna be a huge shortage of food and clean drinking water especially in the low-lying areas. They would be forced to migrate to nearby cities or nearby countries. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that we must tackle climate change as it was a need, and I disagree with those who argue that we can find a way to live with it
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climate
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. I completely disagree with this opinion and I
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, there is ample time to tackle
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climate
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change
.

Firstly
, there are various measures that
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government
and individuals should implement to eradicate the
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changes
. There should be strict laws and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
regarding water and air pollution, and one should pay heavy fines if found abolishing these laws. We should invest in renewable energy sources like air, water, wind, and solar for the production of power. There should be
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some
restrictions on the airlines
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because
they have
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a lot of
carbon dioxide emissions.

As an individual, we should
also
try to limit carbon dioxide by using public transport and
also
bicycles
rather
than using our vehicle around the city. If this method
is adopted
, we can have a significant decline in global warming and air pollution.
However
, it
also
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reduces
fuel consumption and fuel cost.

If
instead
of taking the above-mentioned measures we
simply
try to
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live
with this
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climate
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change
, I believe it has the most harmful consequences.
For example
, if there is even a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
rise in the sea levels, most low-lying areas have gone flooding. Millions of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
would lose their shelter and there is
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be a huge shortage of food and clean drinking water
especially
in the low-lying areas. They would
be forced
to migrate to nearby cities or nearby countries.

In conclusion
, I would like to reiterate that we
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must
tackle
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climate
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change
as it was a need, and I disagree with those who argue that we can find a way to
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live
with it
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IELTS essay Climate change represents a major threat to the lives of the people. But, some people argued that we should make a habit to live with this climate change.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
285 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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