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Reading books and its benefits from the past till now

Reading books and its benefits from the past till now lq5Vo

From a long times ago, books is the best way for people to approach knowledges. Nowadays, books are still giving us benefits effects. First of all, our brains easily receive informations from books then ellectrical devices. Not only brains, also good for eyes. Specailly for children, they need to learn and playing at the same time. A child should spend about 2-3 hours a day for reading books. As a child they cannot use only internet or playing sports for the all days. Secondly, reading books is not unuseful and booring. There are so many type of books that colorful and have cartoon images. Perhaps that will stimulating children reading ability. Conclusion, reading books is a greatest method for children more exciting in learning

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