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Some people believe that parents should make children read more books instead of watching TV or playing games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that parents should make children read more books instead of watching TV or playing games. R0KDG

On the other hand, we should never underestimate the indispensable role of TV and video games in the time of the digitalization. Playing games and watching TV could heighten the capacity for fantasy and benefit the interaction between children and the outward environment. Images and sinh dong sounds from those media bring them joy and fun, evoke the curiosity, the desire to discover new things of the children and hence enhance the visualization as well as the observation ablility. Moreover, when the children play games that requires the coopertation between members in a team, they have to communicate. . . . . with others in order to win the game. This thereby facilitate them to know each others well, make more friends and enlarge the relationship zone.

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