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Overpopulation is a major problem in many urban centers around the world. What does this cause? What measures can be taken to solve it?

Overpopulation is a major problem in many urban centers around the world. What does this cause? What measures can be taken to solve it? gqRLa
Nowadays increasing trends of population is becoming the crucial factor that affects many cities negatively all over the world. Admittedly, there are various complications of overpopulation such as unfavorable environmental pollutions and unemployment whereas, these issues can be solve by making effective allocation of resources and reducing migration. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with overpopulation and propose some possible solutions to avoid them. The main problem caused by overpopulation is air and noise pollution. A growing number of people could makes more involvement in uses of vehicles, industries and natural resources that leads to produces unnecessary noise and makes environmental atmosphere unhealthy. Moreover, unemployment is also one of the unavoidable issue which can be occurs by overcrowding. Every sector of employment has to maintain by its manpower demand and supply but when the proportion of people gets higher therefore supply gets automatically higher than demand that results employment problem. For example, ineffective use of vehicles and industries produces the unhealthy gas like carbon dioxide which makes environmental air pollution. However, there are some problems but it can be solve by the following solutions. Firstly, effective distribution of facilities and resources by the government helps to minimize the use of vehicles, industries and natural resources in a particular area which also helps to maintain equal volume of people in different places. Likewise, reducing the rate of migration of people is the main solution for overcrowding. When people get their needed things in their own place they didn’t tend to move from one place to another. For instance, significant availability of educational institutions and industries may helps to hold youth in their own place. In conclusion, overpopulation in urban area causes the lots of problems including environmental pollution and unemployment but these issues can be reduce by the effective utilization of resources and minimizing migration rate.
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many
cities
negatively
all over the world.
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, there are various complications of
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overpopulation
such as unfavorable
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environmental
pollutions and unemployment whereas, these issues can be
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solve
by making effective allocation of resources and reducing migration. This essay will discuss the main
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problems
associated with
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overpopulation
and propose
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some
possible solutions to avoid them.

The main
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problem
caused by
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overpopulation
is air and noise pollution. A growing number of
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people
could
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makes
more involvement in
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uses
of vehicles,
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industries
and natural resources that leads to produces unnecessary noise and
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makes
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environmental
atmosphere unhealthy.
Moreover
, unemployment is
also
one of the unavoidable issue which can be
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occurs
by overcrowding. Every sector of employment
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has to
maintain by its manpower demand and supply
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when the proportion of
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people
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gets
higher
therefore
supply
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gets
automatically
higher than demand that results employment
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problem
.
For example
, ineffective
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use
of vehicles and
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industries
produces the unhealthy gas like carbon dioxide which
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makes
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environmental
air pollution.

However
, there are
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some
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problems
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but
it can be
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solve
by the following solutions.
Firstly
, effective distribution of facilities and resources by the
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government
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helps
to minimize the
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use
of vehicles,
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industries
and natural resources in a particular area which
also
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helps
to maintain equal volume of
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people
in
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different
places.
Likewise
, reducing the rate of migration of
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people
is the main solution for overcrowding.
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When
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people
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get
their needed things in their
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own
place they didn’t tend to
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move
from one place to another.
For instance
, significant availability of educational institutions and
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industries
may
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helps
to hold youth in their
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own
place.

In conclusion
,
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overpopulation
in urban area causes the lots of
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problems
including
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environmental
pollution and unemployment
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but
these issues can be
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reduce
by the effective utilization of resources and minimizing migration rate.
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IELTS essay Overpopulation is a major problem in many urban centers around the world. What does this cause? What measures can be taken to solve it?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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