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readen books at Starmouth school for boys and girls

The figure summarises the number of readen library books by boys and girls at Starmouth school for four years from 2009 to 2012. The overall trend for girls (shown in a blue line) rose whereas for boys it felled just in the last year. For the first two years (2009-2010), there was a gradual growth for both in which boys read library books twice higher than girls. By a dramatic increase for girls and a slight rise for boys in the third year (2011), surprisingly the numbers for both were the same. But for the last year trend was different for boys and girls, girls proceeded to read more books in 2012, while the number for boys went back to what they had in 2010. In conclusion, girls were more interested in raising the number of books that they read at Starmouth school's library continuously. However, boys read library books 100% more than girls in the first years (2009-2010), the number suddenly dropped for boys in the fourth year (2012), and girls' readen books became significantly higher than boys by 75%.
The figure
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library
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by
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and
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Starmouth
school for four years from 2009 to 2012. The
overall
trend for
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girls
(shown in a blue line) rose whereas for
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boys
it felled
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just
in the last year.

For the
first
two years (2009-2010), there was a gradual growth for both in which
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boys
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read
library
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books
twice higher than
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girls
. By a dramatic increase for
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girls
and a slight rise for
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boys
in the third
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year
(2011),
surprisingly
the
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numbers
for both were the same.
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But
for the last
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year
trend was
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different
for
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boys
and
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girls
,
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girls
proceeded to
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read
more
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books
in 2012, while the
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number
for
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boys
went back to what they had in 2010.

In conclusion
,
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girls
were more interested in raising the
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number
of
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books
that they
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read
at
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Starmouth
school's library
continuously
.
However
,
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boys
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read
library
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books
100% more than
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girls
in the
first
years (2009-2010), the
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number
suddenly
dropped for
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boys
in the fourth
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year
(2012), and girls'
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readen
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books
became
significantly
higher than
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by 75%.
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IELTS essay readen books at Starmouth school for boys and girls

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
181 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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