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The plans below show the layout of university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after development.

The two images show the proposed changes in the university sports centre. To the west of the centre is a outdoor court. It was expected to be constructed a leisure pool that is above a changing room which also be expected to be built connected by a door. Similarly, another outdoor court which is in the east of the centre will plan to be built a sports hall. In the northeast corner there is an empty area while this area will be expected to be constructed a dance studio divided into two parts. At the bottom of the center, there are two buildings to be built on left side and right side, sports shops and cafes, individually. Overall, there are many man-made area in the plans, like outdoor courts and changing room. This project aims to increase more sports facilities and buildings in order to enrich students' leisure time and enhance their body.

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 in the university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
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 a leisure pool that is
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expected
 to be built
 connected by a door. Similarly
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 hall.

In the northeast corner there is an empty area while this area will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to be constructed
 a dance studio divided into two parts. At the bottom of the center, there are two buildings to be built
 on This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side and right side, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 shops and ‘cafes’ is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using “cafés”cafés
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, individually
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Overall
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
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-made area in the plans, like outdoor courts and changing room. This project aims to increase more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 facilities and buildings in order to enrich students' leisure time and enhance their body. 