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Read the notes and write a paragraph on how to make yellow sticky rice.

Read the notes and write a paragraph on how to make yellow sticky rice. jRDOM
Five-coloured sticky rice is an important traditional dish of many ethnic minorities in the northern mountainous regions. People call the dish five-coloured sticky rice because it has five colours: red, yellow, green, purple and white. The things that create the colours are not chemicals but natural roots and leaves. The five colours of the dish represent five elements of life according to Vietnamese beliefs: yellow is earth, red is fire, green is plants, white is metal, and purple or black is water. People believe that these five elements create harmony between heaven and earth. Five-coloured sticky rice is usually made and enjoyed at Tet, in festivals and ceremonies, on special occasions, and whenever the family has guests
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sticky rice is an
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important
traditional dish of
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ethnic minorities in the northern mountainous regions.
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call the dish
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five-coloured
sticky rice
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it has five
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colours
: red, yellow, green, purple and white. The things that create the
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colours
are not chemicals
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natural roots and
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leaves
. The five
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colours
of the dish represent five elements of life according to Vietnamese beliefs: yellow is earth, red is fire, green is plants, white is metal, and purple or black is water.
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People
believe that these five elements create harmony between heaven and earth.
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Five-coloured
sticky rice is
usually
made and enjoyed at Tet, in festivals and ceremonies, on special occasions, and whenever the family has
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guests
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IELTS essay Read the notes and write a paragraph on how to make yellow sticky rice.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
116 words
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