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smacking children is the best form of discipline. to what extent do you agree or disagree. Givethe reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

smacking children is the best form of discipline. Givethe reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience m18jO
There are different methods to teach children discipline. Some parents believe that spanking is the best way to develop children behaviour. This essay will arugue that why physical punishments are absolutely preposterous. There are larger number of parents following physical punishments for teaching their children disciplne. By doing that children will easly obay the parents and they will be affraid about the slapping when they think about doing mischivous activities next time. For example, some parents beat their children when they notice that children are wasting water unnecessarly. Surveys shows that in many families, parents are using such panishments on children. On the other hand, some parents believe that punshing a child physically is not the best method to teach him or her discipline in their life. Because they feel that punishing in means of physical activities can cause children to become stabborn and also to become isolate from the parents. It can also affect them mentally. So according to them explaing the kid what wrong they did and correct them is the best method. Recent surveys done in United states saying that many parents are now oposse to physical punishments such as smacking or spanking. To conclude, this essay argued that why some parents are doing physical punshiments on thier children and its consequences. In my opinion it is abolutely ridiculas to smak children.
There are
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different
methods to teach
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children
discipline.
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Some
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parents
believe that spanking is the best way to develop
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children
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behaviour
.

This essay will
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arugue
that why
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physical
punishments are
absolutely
preposterous.

There are larger number of
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parents
following
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physical
punishments for teaching their
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children
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disciplne
.

By doing that
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children
will
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easly
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obay
the
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parents and
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affraid
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think
about doing
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mischivous
activities
next
time.
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some
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parents
beat their
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children
when they notice

that
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children
are wasting water
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unnecessarly
. Surveys
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shows
that in
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many
families,
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parents
are using such
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panishments
on children.

On the other hand
,
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some
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parents
believe that
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punshing
a child
physically
is not the best method to teach him or her discipline in their life.

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Because
they feel that punishing in means of
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physical
activities can cause
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children
to become
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stabborn
and
also
to become isolate from the parents.

It can
also
affect them mentally.
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according to them
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explaing
the kid what
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wrong
they did and correct them is the best method.

Recent surveys done in
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United states
saying that
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many
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parents
are
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now
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oposse
to
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physical
punishments such as smacking or spanking.

To conclude
, this essay argued that why
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some
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parents
are doing
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physical
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punshiments
on
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thier
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children
and its consequences. In my opinion it is
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abolutely


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ridiculas
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smak
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children
.
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IELTS essay smacking children is the best form of discipline. Givethe reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

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