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Ragging was started with a positive attitude but with the passage of time has become a nuisance. It is much debated today that ragging should banned in educational institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with idea?

Ragging was started with a positive attitude but with the passage of time has become a nuisance. It is much debated today that ragging should banned in educational institutions. with idea? BlRmj
Ragging now a days is becoming a fun play time for the kids of young age and for the youth in college. Therefore, they don't now the causes how the others will react or be distracted in life. However, I disagree with the idea of Ragging. Firstly, ragging is done in universities, colleges, and school as the freshers comes in the college they gets scared as they already got to know about the seniors. As seniors they sometimes physically and mentally tortures the freshers. Due to which they don't know that they are stepping into the illegal academic laws and are offending the academic rules. Also, many seniors in physically slaps beat and pressures the junior to do the assignment. However, due to ragging alot of physical torture is taken by the freshers who have come from small towns. They do it due the pressure and so that there parents don't get any kind of trouble due to them. Also, psychological Ragging is the many purpose of suicides happening in the youth age category and also depression is increasing when they don't get to live free and being tortured every single day. For example, a friend of mine is in depression due to bullying and harassment by his seniors in the college. And couldn't get over it, due to which his family is also suffering with him to get over it. In my opinion Ragging should be banned in every single school college and universities, so that the brighter students should be free to go in higher colleges without the fear of Ragging and can achieve do grades and make senior friends for guidance To conclude, I would like to say that no one should be afraid of anyone in school and college of seniors. Br confident and face him with a rule and regulations way in the academics.
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Ragging
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now a days
is becoming a fun play time for the kids of young age and for the youth in college.
Therefore
, they
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don't
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now
the causes how the others will react or
be distracted
in life.
However
, I disagree with the
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idea
of
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Ragging
.
Firstly
,
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ragging
is done
in universities, colleges, and school as the freshers
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comes
in the college they
The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "get"
gets
scared as they already
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got
to know about the
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seniors
. As
The comma is probably missing here: "seniors, they".
seniors they
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sometimes
physically
and mentally tortures the freshers.
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Due
to which they
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don't
know that they are stepping into the illegal academic laws and are offending the academic
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rules
.
Also
,
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many
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seniors
in
physically
slaps beat and pressures the junior to do the assignment.
However
,
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due
to
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ragging
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alot
of physical torture
is taken
by the freshers who have
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come
from
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small
towns. They do it
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due
the pressure and
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so
that there parents
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don't
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get
any kind of trouble
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due
to them.
Also
, psychological
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Ragging
is the
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many purpose
of suicides happening in the youth age category and
also
depression is increasing when they
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don't
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get
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
free and
being tortured
every single day.
For example
, a friend of mine is in depression
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due
to bullying and harassment by his
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seniors
in the college. And couldn't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
over it,
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due
to which his family is
also
suffering with him to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
over it. In my opinion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Ragging
should
be banned
in every single school college and universities,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that the brighter students should be free to go in higher colleges without the fear of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Ragging
and can achieve do grades and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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senior
friends for guidance
To conclude
, I would like to say that no one should be afraid of anyone in school and college of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
seniors
. Br confident and face him with a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
and regulations way in the academics.
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IELTS essay Ragging was started with a positive attitude but with the passage of time has become a nuisance. It is much debated today that ragging should banned in educational institutions. with idea?

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