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love people for who they are, not for what they have.

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My mother always taught me that you have to love people for who they are, not for what they have. We live in a superficial society that unfortunately gives importance to frivolous subjects. Humanly we have become indifferent to sensitive topics, emotions, situations, etc. humanly we have become indifferent to sensitive issues, emotions, feelings, etc. we live in a hurry and have become nefarious and material beings. But this makes me quite sad because, for me, what matters is what is inside people, their souls and hearts. What really matters is not found in people's possessions, or how they look, is found inside each person.
My mother always taught me that you
have to
love
people
for who they are, not for what they have. We
live
in a superficial society that unfortunately gives importance to frivolous subjects.
Humanly
we have become indifferent to sensitive topics, emotions, situations, etc.

humanly
we have become indifferent to sensitive issues, emotions, feelings, etc. we
live
in a hurry and have become nefarious and material beings.
But
this
makes
me quite sad
because
, for me, what matters
is
what is inside
people
, their souls and hearts.

What
really
matters is not found in
people
's possessions, or how they look,
is found
inside each person.

IELTS essay love people for who they are, not for what they have.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
105 words
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