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love people for who they are, not for what they have.

love people for who they are, not for what they have. aq9qX

My mother always taught me that you have to love people for who they are, not for what they have. We live in a superficial society that unfortunately gives importance to frivolous subjects. Humanly we have become indifferent to sensitive topics, emotions, situations, etc. humanly we have become indifferent to sensitive issues, emotions, feelings, etc. we live in a hurry and have become nefarious and material beings. But this makes me quite sad because, for me, what matters is what is inside people, their souls and hearts. What really matters is not found in people's possessions, or how they look, is found inside each person.

My mother always taught me that you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
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people
 for who they are, not for what they have. We This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in a superficial society that unfortunately gives importance to frivolous subjects. Humanly
 we have become indifferent to sensitive topics, emotions, situations, etc.

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humanly
 we have become indifferent to sensitive issues, emotions, feelings, etc. we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 in a hurry and have become nefarious and material beings. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 me quite sad This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
, for me, what matters Possible agreement error. You should probably use: "am", "are", "aren".amarearen
is
 what is inside This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
, their souls and hearts.

What really
 matters is not found in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
's possessions, or how they look, is found
 inside each person. 