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INTEGRATED ESSAY- REGULATION AND DEREGULATION. KAPLAN'Ssummarize both the passage and the lecture. Then explain how the passage and the lecture differs from each other.

INTEGRATED ESSAY- REGULATION AND DEREGULATION. KAPLAN'Ssummarize both the passage and the lecture. Then explain how the passage and the lecture differs from each other. VBnQw

The passage mainly describes that market regulation is a trend that was introduced in 1887 as the interstate commerce commision, which is usually created by the politicians, producers or consumers that controls the price, route, transportation services. In addition, it mentions some of the advantages of the regulatory system over the deregulation. However, the lecture disagrees with the passage citing some recent examples of the deregulation. She puts emphasis on the advantages of the deregulatory trend. The first advantage the lecturer points out is that the hike of the price is actual. . .

The passage mainly
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describes
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commision
, which is usually
 created by the politicians, producers or consumers that controls the price, route, transportation services. In addition
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some of the
 advantages of the regulatory system over the deregulation. However
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some
 recent examples of the deregulation. She puts emphasis on the advantages of the Possible spelling mistake found.regulatory
deregulatory
 trend.

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 advantage the lecturer points out is that the hike of the price is actual. Don't put a space before the full stop.
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IELTS essay INTEGRATED ESSAY- REGULATION AND DEREGULATION. KAPLAN'Ssummarize both the passage and the lecture. Then explain how the passage and the lecture differs from each other.

Essay

American English

2 paragraphs

94 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
Include an introduction and conclusion
Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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