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Question: Briefly summarize the problem the speakers are discussing. Then state which of the two solutions from the conversation you would recommend. Explain the reasons for your recommendation. . v.1

Question: Briefly summarize the problem the speakers are discussing. Then state which of the two solutions from the conversation you would recommend. Explain the reasons for your recommendation. . v. 1
As is known, certain individuals think that news has no relation to the lives of humans; as a result, it is a waste of time reading news in the newspaper and watching television news programs. Therefore, it is utterly claimed that several human beings think news has no association with people’s lives, so it could be a waste of time to perused news within the daily paper and observe news programs on TV. I somewhat agree with the above-mentioned idea as the arguments for and against it are equal. This essay will discuss both sides of the provided argument. The major reason why I think that reading news in the newspaper and watching news programs are a waste of time is because individuals spend the amount of time and a great number of money. To be more specific, in todays world, people have a hectic schedule, so they have not enough time in order to read newspapers or to watch news programs. One clear example of this is that when humans want to read newspapers or to watch news programs, they should spend a plethora of time. Therefore, it is time consuming for employers and they just may lose their time. Another convincing argument is that people cannot watch programs which is crucial for them such movies or particular programs. Consequently, If they spend their time in order to reading and watching newspaper, they cannot do their special activities. From another angle, I am also convinced that learn something about the world, whether they read and watch news programs. This is because it is a another type of learning method about the world. For instance, intellectual people may learn from reading newspaper and watching news programs. As a result, people also learn from newspapers. By way of conclusion, considering the aforementioned points, I somehow agree that several human beings think news has no association with people’s lives, so it could be a waste of time to perused news within the daily paper and observe news programs on TV. I recommend that people should read newspapers and watching news on TV.
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, certain individuals
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humans
;
as a result
, it is a
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of
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time
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reading
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news
in the
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newspaper
and watching television
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news
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programs
.
Therefore
, it is
utterly
claimed that several
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human
beings
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think
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news
has no association with
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people’s
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lives
,
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so
it could be a
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waste
of
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time
to perused
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news
within the daily paper and observe
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news
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programs
on TV. I somewhat
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agree
with the above-mentioned
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idea
as the arguments for and against it are equal. This essay will discuss both sides of the provided argument.

The major reason why I
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think
that
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reading
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in the
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newspaper
and watching
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news
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programs
are a
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waste
of
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time
is
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because
individuals spend the amount of
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time
and a great number of money. To be more specific, in
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todays
world,
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people
have a hectic schedule,
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so
they have not
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enough
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time
in order to
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read
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newspapers
or to
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watch
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news
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programs
. One
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clear
example of this is that when
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humans
want to
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read
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newspapers
or to
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watch
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news
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programs
, they should spend a plethora of
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time
.
Therefore
, it is
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time consuming
for
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employers and
they
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may lose their
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time
. Another convincing argument is that
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people
cannot
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watch
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programs
which is crucial for them such movies or particular
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programs
.
Consequently
, If they spend their
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time
in order to
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reading
and watching
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newspaper
, they cannot do their special activities.

From another angle, I am
also
convinced that learn something about the world, whether they
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read
and
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watch
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news
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programs
. This is
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because
it is
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a
another type of learning method about the world.
For instance
, intellectual
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people
may learn from
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reading
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newspaper
and watching
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news
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programs
.
As a result
,
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people
also
learn from newspapers.

By way of conclusion, considering the aforementioned points, I somehow
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agree
that several
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human
beings
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think
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news
has no association with
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people’s
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lives
,
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so
it could be a
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waste
of
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time
to perused
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news
within the daily paper and observe
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news
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programs
on TV. I recommend that
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people
should
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read
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newspapers
and watching
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news
on TV.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Question: Briefly summarize the problem the speakers are discussing. Then state which of the two solutions from the conversation you would recommend. Explain the reasons for your recommendation. . v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
350 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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