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q5. The students discuss which of the exams the women should study for first. Describe the two exams. Then explain which of the exam you feel she should study first ad why. v.1

q5. The students discuss which of the exams the women should study for first. Describe the two exams. Then explain which of the exam you feel she should study first ad why. v. 1
Our planet is a home for about 7. 7 billion people who are living in 195 countries on seven continents. There are rich and poor countries in the world. For the purposes of ameliorate the conditions of human beings` lives the world community provides financial loans to the poorest countries. The question should the debts be forgiven or reduced has been widely discussed recently. There is no clear answer to this question from my point of view. There are always two sides of a coin. On the one hand, in case of impossibility of some countries to pay the debts and the interest because it can destroy their weak economy and lead to a worse crisis the international financial organizations should better eliminate the debts. For example, a number of the poorest African territories are not able to repay, but in those donations there are benefits for the whole world: to prevent spread of diseases by financing the vaccination, to feed on thousands of children dying every year from starvation, to increase levels of education in order to decrease corruption and to give people a chance for a better future. On the other hand, we all understand that financial aid appears from taxes that citizens pay to the budgets of their countries and not every person agrees to support someone’s needs. It is natural and the governments should accept it. The decision to reduce or forgive the debts should be built according to the interests of its own society. For instance, the Russian Federation has given many debts to underdeveloped countries and because of the decision of the Paris Club, the international organization of creditors, a member of which Russia appears, this country had to forgive or postpone payments back. Citizens feel unsatisfied; they clearly understand there are a lot of gaps in the economy of their government to use that money. To summarize, there are always pros and cons in such difficult question. Many factors should be taken into account. In some situations the debts should be forgiven, as it leads to other advantages; but before offering to eliminate loans politics should satisfy the requirements of its own society.
Our planet is a home for about 7. 7 billion
people
who are living in 195
countries
on seven continents. There are rich and poor
countries
in the world. For the purposes of ameliorate the conditions of human beings`
lives
the world community provides financial loans to the poorest
countries
. The question should the
debts
be forgiven
or
reduced
has been
widely
discussed recently. There is no
clear
answer to this question from my point of view. There are always two sides of a coin.

On the one hand, in case of impossibility of
some
countries
to pay the
debts
and the interest
because
it can
destroy
their weak economy and lead to a worse crisis the international financial organizations should better eliminate the
debts
.
For example
, a number of the poorest African territories are not able to repay,
but
in those donations there are benefits for the whole world: to
prevent
spread of diseases by financing the vaccination, to feed on thousands of children dying every year from starvation, to increase levels of education in order to decrease corruption and to give
people
a chance for a better future.

On the other hand
, we all understand that financial aid appears from taxes that citizens pay to the budgets of their
countries
and not every person
agrees
to support someone’s needs. It is natural and the
governments
should accept it. The decision to
reduce
or forgive the
debts
should
be built
according to the interests of its
own
society.
For instance
, the Russian Federation has
given
many
debts
to underdeveloped
countries
and
because
of the decision of the Paris Club, the international organization of creditors, a member of which Russia appears, this
country
had to forgive or postpone payments back. Citizens feel unsatisfied; they
clearly
understand there are
a lot of
gaps in the economy of their
government
to
use
that money.

To summarize
, there are always pros and cons in such difficult question.
Many
factors should
be taken
into account. In
some
situations the
debts
should
be forgiven
, as it leads to other advantages;
but
before
offering to eliminate loans politics should satisfy the requirements of its
own
society.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay q5. The students discuss which of the exams the women should study for first. Describe the two exams. Then explain which of the exam you feel she should study first ad why. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
360 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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