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Q- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words. v.1

Q- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? v. 1
Nowadays, the education sector is upgrading from conventional classrooms to online courses, thanks to the Internet. Some universities are following this tread wholeheartedly and enabling people with a better learning experience around the globe. But this advancement bears a negative aspect along with a positive, which I will discuss now. The foremost merit of e-courses is to connect with the people residing remotely from the university. As all universities do not offer every course and people may find it difficult to pursue a course in which he/she is interested. For instance, a student living in India wants to study an executive diploma course which is available in online mode by a Canadian university, so the student can take this advantage. E-Courses give liberty to the people to improve their skill set without compromising their self-interests. Therefore, the provision of online courses is assisting many students around the world. The disadvantage of online study is the lack of an environment that often results in losing concentration. A teacher cannot pay attention to individuals which is possible in a classroom and sometimes people indulge in other activities. For illustration, a student might start playing games on a mobile along with the online lecture. This happens because our minds get diverted as people don’t feel the fear of the faculty and do whatever they want to do. In a nutshell, the lack of concentration varies from person to person and one can practice exercises to amplify their focus. To conclude, e-learning provides enormous pros and one shouldn’t look to the negative side when it comes to acquiring knowledge. Therefore, online study is a positive development in the field of education and I believe it will continue to revolutionaries the existing learning methods, also preparing people to deal the future endeavors with success.
Nowadays, the education sector is upgrading from conventional classrooms to
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online
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courses
, thanks to the Internet.
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Some
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universities
are following this tread
wholeheartedly
and enabling
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people
with a better learning experience around the globe.
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But
this advancement bears a
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negative
aspect along with a
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positive
, which I will discuss
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now
.

The foremost merit of e-courses is to connect with the
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people
residing
remotely
from the
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university
. As all
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universities
do not offer every
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course
and
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people
may find it difficult to pursue a
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course
in which he/she
is interested
.
For instance
, a
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student
living in India wants to study an executive diploma
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course
which is available in
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online
mode by a Canadian
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university
,
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so
the
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student
can take this advantage. E-Courses give liberty to the
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people
to
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improve
their
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skill
set without compromising their self-interests.
Therefore
, the provision of
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online
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courses
is assisting
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many
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students
around the world.

The disadvantage of
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online
study is the lack of an environment that
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often
results in losing concentration. A teacher cannot pay attention to individuals which is possible in a classroom and
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sometimes
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people
indulge in other activities. For illustration, a
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student
might
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start
playing games on a mobile along with the
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online
lecture. This happens
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because
our minds
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get
diverted as
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people
don’t feel the fear of the faculty and do whatever they want to do. In a nutshell, the lack of concentration varies from person to person and one can practice exercises to amplify their focus.

To conclude
, e-learning provides enormous pros and one shouldn’t look to the
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negative
side when it
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comes
to acquiring knowledge.
Therefore
,
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online
study is a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
development in the field of education and I believe it will continue to revolutionaries the existing learning methods,
also
preparing
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people
to deal the future endeavors with success.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Q- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
299 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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