With the advanced education, the number of undergraduate has been increasing. Some insist that a number of university students only result in rising an unemployment rate of graduates and it is not beneficial for society. Although I understand this opinion, I would argue that the large proportion of undergraduates has positive effects on society.
Admittedly, there are some disadvantages to the increasing number of university student. To begin with, many young people may put pressure on themselves to have a bachelor's degree even though it is not necessary. For example, in Korea, almost people in modern society tend to go to the university after being graduated from high school. Because of this tendency, some people could apply for admission to university without enough thinking what they want to be. Therefore, if those could graduate from university, they are likely to be unsatisfied with their major. In this sense, a lack of confidence with their major could lead to frequent failures in finding decent jobs. As a result, this tendency to demand higher education could not only increase graduate unemployment rate, but also cause individuals to lose time and money.
However, I still believe that well-educated people influence society positively. Programmes aimed at preparing global competition for employment help university students to find high quality jobs. This is because university students can improve their ability through these programmes, competing with their peers and obtaining expertise in their field. It is a proved fact that intelligent people can bring about more benefits for economic growth than physical workers. In addition, strengthening individuals' ability in terms of their major can successfully contribute to social outcomes such as health care or technology industries. As a result, developing the level of education will lead to a national growth more and more in many ways.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, the increasing number of graduates might have a negative effect on both individuals and society, but I believe that this should be seen as a positive development in many ways.
With the advanced education, the
number
of undergraduate has been increasing.
Some
insist that a
number
of
university
students
only
result in rising an unemployment rate of
graduates
and it is not beneficial for
society
. Although I understand this opinion, I would argue that the large proportion of undergraduates has
positive
effects on society.
Admittedly
, there are
some
disadvantages to the increasing
number
of
university
student
. To
begin
with,
many
young
people
may put pressure on themselves to have a bachelor's degree
even though
it is not necessary.
For example
, in Korea, almost
people
in modern
society
tend to go to the
university
after
being graduated
from high school.
Because of this
tendency,
some
people
could apply for admission to
university
without
enough
thinking what they want to be.
Therefore
, if those could
graduate
from
university
, they are likely to
be unsatisfied
with their major. In this sense, a lack of confidence with their major could lead to frequent failures in finding decent jobs.
As a result
, this tendency to demand higher education could not
only
increase
graduate
unemployment rate,
but
also
cause individuals to lose time and money.
However
, I
still
believe that well-educated
people
influence
society
positively
.
Programmes
aimed at preparing global competition for employment
help
university
students
to find high quality jobs. This is
because
university
students
can
improve
their ability through these
programmes
, competing with their peers and obtaining expertise in their field. It is a proved fact that intelligent
people
can bring about more benefits for economic growth than physical workers.
In addition
, strengthening individuals' ability in terms of their major can
successfully
contribute to social outcomes such as health care or technology industries.
As a result
, developing the level of education will lead to a national growth more and more in
many
ways.
In conclusion
, according to the aforementioned reasons, the increasing
number
of
graduates
might have a
negative
effect on both individuals and
society
,
but
I believe that this should be
seen
as a
positive
development in
many
ways.