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Public places are very noisy nowadays. What are the reasons for this ? What solution would u propose ?

Public places are very noisy nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What solution would u propose? nR5yg
There is no doubt that public places have become a lot noisier than they used to be. There are multiple reasons for this like poor traffic management and bad behaviour by people in public. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and also propose my solutions to overcome this problem. Loud noise can get on our nerves very easily, there are very few people who can tolerate it. Even then, most of us contribute to it in one way or the other. These days people, for the sake of convenience, tend to have personal vehicle to get their work or carry out their daily chores. As a result, there are multiple vehicles on the road. When the traffic is managed correctly, this might not be an issue, but otherwise it could problematic. For example, if a minor accident takes place on a busy road on a weekday in a metropolitan city like Mumbai or Delhi and due to that small part of the road might get blocked with people examining if anyone was hurt. Meanwhile, there are hundreds of vehicles and cars honking to pass the road. We can only imagine the amount of noise generated in such scenarios. Sometimes, during such an accident, people involved in it might get into a fight and start yelling at each other rather than handling it peacefully. This behaviour of people can also add on to the noise evidently making public places noisier. Cause of noise in public places, could also be due to loud music during occasions like marriages and new year celebration. To talk about solutions to these problems, I would suggest that in every traffic signal, like we have a Traffic police officer we should have an Accident management squad that should take immediate actions in situations like these and help reduce the noise by making sure that people don’t get into fights. Also, government should strictly regulate their existing sound restrictions set for a particular place and in case of violation people should be charged heavy fines. To conclude, we the public, should co-operate with government and be aware of the repercussions that are a result of loud noise in public places. Only then can this be dealt with, reduced even if not eradicated.
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public
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places
have become a lot noisier than they
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used
to be. There are multiple reasons for this like poor
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traffic
management and
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bad
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behaviour
by
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people
in
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public
. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons and
also
propose my solutions to overcome this problem.

Loud
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noise
can
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get
on our nerves
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very
easily
, there are
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very
few
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people
who can tolerate it. Even then, most of us contribute to it in one way or the other. These days
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people
, for the sake of convenience, tend to have personal vehicle to
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get
their work or carry out their daily chores.
As a result
, there are multiple vehicles on the
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road
. When the
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traffic
is managed
correctly
, this might not be an issue,
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but
otherwise
it could problematic.
For example
, if a minor accident takes
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place
on a busy
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road
on a weekday in a metropolitan city like Mumbai or Delhi and due to that
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small
part of the
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road
might
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get
blocked with
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people
examining if anyone
was hurt
. Meanwhile, there are hundreds of vehicles and cars honking to pass the
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road
. We can
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only
imagine the amount of
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noise
generated in such scenarios.
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Sometimes
, during such an accident,
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people
involved in it might
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get
into a fight and
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yelling at each other
rather
than

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handling
it
peacefully
. This
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behaviour
of
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people
can
also
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add
on to the
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noise
evidently
making
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public
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places
noisier. Cause of
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noise
in
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public
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places
, could
also
be due to loud music during occasions like marriages and new year celebration.

To talk about solutions to these problems, I would suggest that in every
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traffic
signal, like we have a
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Traffic
police officer we should have an Accident management squad that should take immediate actions in situations like these and
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help
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reduce
the
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noise
by making sure that
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people
don’t
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get
into fights.
Also
,
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government
should
strictly
regulate their existing sound restrictions set for a particular
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place
and in case of violation
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people
should
be charged
heavy fines.

To conclude
, we the
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public
, should co-operate with
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government
and be aware of the repercussions that are a result of loud
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noise
in
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public
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places
.
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Only
then can this
be dealt
with,
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reduced
even if not eradicated.
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IELTS essay Public places are very noisy nowadays. What are the reasons for this? What solution would u propose?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
376 words
6.0
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