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Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience XNyY
It is a fact that public libraries are present in almost all cities across the globe, due to its emerging needs. In addition to let reading and selling books, most of the libraries have digital media like software, videos and DVDs. I refute that on top of providing books, libraries should not the rovide latest media to the users. This can be proven by analysing how libraries can attract youths as well as have an advanced effect, by having the option of lending latest technological media. Firstly, by providing latest media in libraries, a lot of youngsters will be interested in coming to the library, as they are very comfortable with using the latest technology. For example, consider the software which helps in learning a language. For the young people who are comfortable in using computers can learn the language within very less time, as the software acts as a very good guide. If the same task has to be accomplished by a book, people would find it very difficult as there is no feedback. Thus, it is obvious that by lending latest technology in libraries, can be advantageous. Secondly, high technological media can give advance effect as it can be played on the appropriate gadget. For instance, a DVD player has an option to stream the video and it can have the appropriate sound effect. Moreover, it has an option to start, stop and move forward or backwards at any time. Books cannot have any additional effect. Hence, it is clear why lending latest technological media in the library is worth. The present era is the blessing of technology and these technological advancements should be embraced as many ways as possible. We are not talking about replacing books by using technological advancement, rather we are talking about adding the benefits that the technology can offer in a library where more people would come and get better facility and learning environment. Hence, spending money for technological benefits in a library is never a waste of money. By analysing how lending latest technological media in libraries can help more youngsters attracted as well as can have special effects, it is considered that libraries must provide updated media. It is predicted that the government will give financial support to the libraries to have the latest media.
It is a fact that public libraries are present in almost all cities across the globe, due to its emerging needs.
In addition
to
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let
reading and selling
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books
, most of the libraries have digital
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media
like software, videos and DVDs. I refute that on top of providing
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books
, libraries should not the
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rovide
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latest
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media
to the users. This can
be proven
by
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analysing
how libraries can attract youths
as well
as have an advanced
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effect
, by having the option of
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lending
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latest
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technological
media.

Firstly
, by providing
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latest
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media
in libraries,
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a lot of
youngsters will
be interested
in coming to the library, as they are
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very
Consider using "comfortable using".
comfortable with using
the latest
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technology
.
For example
, consider the software which
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helps
in learning a language. For the young
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people
who are comfortable in using computers can learn the language within
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very
less time, as the software acts as a
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very
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good
guide. If the same task
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has to
be accomplished
by a
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book
,
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people
would find it
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very
difficult as there is no feedback.
Thus
, it is obvious that by
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lending
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latest
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technology
in libraries, can be advantageous.

Secondly
, high
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technological
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media
can give advance
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effect
as it can
be played
on the appropriate gadget.
For instance
, a DVD player has an option to stream the video and it can have the appropriate sound
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effect
.
Moreover
, it has an option to
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start
,
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stop
and
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move
forward or backwards at any time.
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Books
cannot have any additional
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effect
.
Hence
, it is
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clear
why
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lending
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
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technological
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media
in the library is worth. The present era is the blessing of
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technology
and these
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technological
advancements should
be embraced
as
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many
ways as possible. We are not talking about replacing
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books
by using
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technological
advancement,
rather
we are talking about adding the benefits that the
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technology
can offer in a library where more
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people
would
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come
and
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get
better facility and learning environment.
Hence
, spending money for
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technological
benefits in a library is never a waste of money.

By
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analysing
how
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lending
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
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technological
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media
in libraries can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
more youngsters attracted
as well
as can have special effects, it
is considered
that libraries
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must
provide updated
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
. It
is predicted
that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
will give financial support to the libraries to have the latest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
.
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IELTS essay Public libraries should provide books and not waste their limited resources on expensive high-tech media such as software, videos or DVDs. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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6.0
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