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How we can save the environment. Humans are responsible for protecting the nature, and we can also take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. Fortunately, there are a number of possible solutions which could lead to a permanent reduction of pollution all over the world. One way would be to plant more trees, so that there is more oxygen. If there are a number of trees, there is more oxygen for fresh breathing, especially in those with respiratory disease. Another solution of this, jungles and forests should be protected or else wild animals` natural habitats will be destroyed and as a result some animals may become extinct. This in turn led to lose the law of nature. The most effective method of using environmentally friendly products should be encouraged so that we do not pollute the water or damage the ozone layer simply by cleaning the house. Furthermore, more people should use public transport or bicycles; then the air in cities would be a lot cleaner and less fuel would be wasted. All things considered, there are many solutions to the problem of damaging environment. The sooner these solutions are put into action the more significant and both national governments and individuals must play their part in looking after the environment.

How we can save the environment.

Humans are responsible for protecting the nature, and we can also
 take steps to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the damage that we are causing to the planet. Fortunately
, there are a number of possible You use this word too often, consider replacing it withquick fixexplanationresult
solutions
 which could lead to a permanent reduction of pollution all over the world.

One way would be to plant more trees, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that there is more oxygen. If there are a number of trees, there is more oxygen for fresh breathing, especially
 in those with respiratory disease. Another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withquick fixexplanationresult
solution
 of this, jungles and forests should be protected
 or else wild animals` natural habitats will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demolishedruined
destroyed
 and as a result
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 animals may become extinct. This in turn led to lose the law of nature.

The most effective method of using environmentally
 friendly products should be encouraged
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we do not pollute the water or damage the ozone layer simply
 by cleaning the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Furthermore
, more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 public transport or bicycles; then the air in cities would be a lot cleaner and less fuel would be wasted
.

All things considered, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withquick fixexplanationresult
solutions
 to the problem of damaging environment. The sooner these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withquick fixexplanationresult
solutions
are put
 into action the more significant and both national This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritiespublic authorities
governments
 and individuals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 play their part in looking after the environment. 