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Some people argue that government should provide free housing to the citizens who cannot afford it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people argue that government should provide free housing to the citizens who cannot afford it. with this statement. 7PEM3
Public who do not afford to own houses should be given free homes by the government is advocated by many people. I agree to this statement to a lower extent. On the one side, providing free shelter by the government to poorer public offers numerous benefits. Firstly, the public which is incapable to work and cannot possess roofs on their heads, giving free homes by the government would be a quite helpfull idea. This will spread the sense of care and hospitability of the government, and public would shower respect. This is indeed government's responsibility to take care of their public's vulnurabilities and incapabilities. On the other side, the downsides of providing free houses are enormous. Primarily, since this approach might allow people to avoid hardwork as they would get shelters anyhow, this will make public lethargic and incompetence. In depth, as long as public would be aware of such free scheme, they would always run from pursuaing any works. This would resultantly turn out to be unproductive practice which can make public entirely dependent on the government. Secondly, as free of cost would consume hefty amount of funds, this may imbalance country's economy as well. Governing authorities already have alot of responsibilities on their shoulder. If government started granting free houses, this might swallow a considerable amount of revenues, and country might face financial crunch in the future. Therefore, overall it is just an idea which can remain in papers but in actual, it may give birth to many issues. To encapsulate, it can be re-iterated that some people believe that government should come forward to provide free houses to their citizens as a gesture of look after, but this may hurt the entire country as it can make public lazy and bring futuristic econmic issues.
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should be
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given
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free
homes by the
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is advocated
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many
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people
. I
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agree
to this statement to a lower extent.

On the one side, providing
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free
shelter by the
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government
to poorer
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public
offers numerous benefits.
Firstly
, the
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public
which is incapable to work and cannot possess roofs on their heads, giving
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free
homes by the
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government
would be a quite
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helpfull
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idea
. This will spread the sense of care and
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hospitability
of the
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government
, and
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public
would shower respect. This is
indeed
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government
's responsibility to take care of their public's
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vulnurabilities
and
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incapabilities
.

On the other side, the downsides of providing
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free
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houses
are enormous.
Primarily
, since this approach might
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allow
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people
to avoid
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hardwork
as they would
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get
shelters anyhow, this will
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make
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public
lethargic and incompetence. In depth, as long as
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public
would be aware of such
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free
scheme, they would always run from
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pursuaing
any works. This would
resultantly
turn out to be unproductive practice which can
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make
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public
entirely
dependent on the
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government
.
Secondly
, as
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of cost would consume hefty amount of funds, this may imbalance country's economy
as well
. Governing authorities already have
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alot
of responsibilities on their shoulder. If
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government
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started
granting
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free
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houses
, this might swallow a considerable amount of revenues, and country might face financial crunch in the future.
Therefore
,
overall
it is
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just
an
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which can remain in papers
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but
in actual, it may give birth to
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many
issues.

To encapsulate, it can be re-iterated that
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some
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people
believe that
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government
should
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come
forward to provide
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free
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houses
to their citizens as a gesture of look after,
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but
this may hurt the entire country as it can
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make
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public
lazy and bring futuristic
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econmic
issues.
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IELTS essay Some people argue that government should provide free housing to the citizens who cannot afford it. with this statement.

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