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Provide a brief overview of your current working environment

Provide a brief overview of your current working environment AJb1e
We have been discussing my performance and the responsibilities I carry out in the future. Firstly, I am on the right way to implement my assignments as well as acquire extensive knowledge. Secondly, my manager shares with me about the areas I need to improve to have good performance in my tasks listed in section A as well as contribute a part to the overall strategy of REP as well as the success of our company.
We have been discussing my performance and the responsibilities I carry out in the future.
Firstly
, I am on the right way to implement my assignments
as well
as acquire extensive knowledge.
Secondly
, my manager shares with me about the areas I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
to have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
performance in my tasks listed in section A
as well
as contribute a part to the
overall
strategy of REP
as well
as the success of our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
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IELTS essay Provide a brief overview of your current working environment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
76 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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