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In this day and age, being able to cater humans’ needs, smartphones have become undeniably inseparable from our lives. In spite of the fact that it is beneficial to both our work and life, it also brings about a number of consequences which shall be discussed in this essay. On the one hand, smartphones provide us with a number of benefits. Firstly, it is a useful tool for school and work. Being aware of users’ needs, many corporations and companies have made their products much more adaptable to users by releasing them in apps which can be downloaded and used on smartphones. Furthermore, there have been a handful of applications to help us create a healthy and balanced lifestyle such as apps to calculate our bedtime, calculate the calories we consume, the footsteps we walked today or a tool to journal or record our feelings. Last but not least, it is a convenient tool for us to connect to everyone anywhere at any time. With the assistance of a phone, you can easily call anyone from very far away On the other hand, smartphones can bring potential drawbacks. Firstly, if you do not have good time management skills as well as resistance, you may be in much likelihood to spend hours scrolling social media platforms and lose time to get our work done or any other self-developing activities. Moreover, spending too much time on your phone may enable you to lose connection with the people around you. This may seem confusing but the truth is the phone seems to be able to keep us in contact with those who are extremely far away from us through social networks and keep us away from people who are nearby by engaging us on the phone all the time, texting and phone calling all the time. In conclusion, smartphones can be a useful tool when it comes to work and life management, and might take away our time and connection with other people at the same time. However, the fact that it is helpful or not depends on how the users make use of this tool.
In this day and age, being able to cater humans’ needs, smartphones have become
undeniably
inseparable from our
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lives
.
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In spite of
the fact that it is beneficial to both our
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work
and life, it
also
brings about a number of consequences which shall
be discussed
in this essay.

On the one hand, smartphones provide us with a number of benefits.
Firstly
, it is a useful
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tool
for school and
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work
. Being aware of users’ needs,
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many
corporations and
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companies
have made their products much more adaptable to users by releasing them in apps which can
be downloaded
and
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used
on smartphones.
Furthermore
, there have been a handful of applications to
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help
us create a healthy and balanced lifestyle such as apps to calculate our bedtime, calculate the calories we consume, the footsteps we walked
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today
or a
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tool
to journal or record our feelings. Last
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but
not least, it is a convenient
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tool
for us to connect to everyone anywhere at any
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time
. With the assistance of a
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phone
, you can
easily
call anyone from
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very
far
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away


On the other hand
, smartphones can bring potential drawbacks.
Firstly
, if you do not have
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good
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time
management
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skills
as well
as resistance, you may be in much likelihood to spend hours scrolling social media platforms and lose
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time
to
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get
our
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work
done or any other self-developing activities.
Moreover
, spending too much
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time
on your
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phone
may enable you to lose connection with the
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people
around you. This may seem confusing
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but
the truth is the
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phone
seems to be able to
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keep
us in contact with those who are
extremely
far away from us through social networks and
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keep
us away from
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people
who are nearby by engaging us on the
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phone
all the
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time
, texting and
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phone
calling all the time.

In conclusion
, smartphones can be a useful
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tool
when it
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comes
to
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work
and life management, and might take away our
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time
and connection with other
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people
at the same
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time
.
However
, the fact that it is helpful or not depends on how the users
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use
of this
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tool
.
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IELTS essay pros and cons of smartphones

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4 paragraphs
353 words
6.0
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