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Nowadays everyone want to earn money via jobs high income is more important than work conditions . Do you agree or disagree

Nowadays everyone want to earn money via jobs high income is more important than work conditions. VYY3D
nowadays everyone want to earn money via jobs high income is more important than work conditions. i partially agree with this viewEarn more salary is much important in today. firstly expenditure rise day by day and every one want to afford their family outlays in any condition. if people want to provide proper facility, they will earn money. price of everything is very high like, food and other usable things, while without these things living is impossible. That is why, big salary is most important. Moreover, individuals want to good lifestyle and want to puchase big cars and spend money on improve lifestyle, because of these they do work without satisfaction. Apart from it, they want to provide better education for their children which is not possible for poor people. Hence, they do work for much money. However
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nowadays
everyone
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want
to earn
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money
via jobs high income is more
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important
than work conditions.
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i
partially
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agree
with this
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viewEarn
more salary is much
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important
in
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today
.
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firstly
expenditure rise day by day and every one
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want
to afford their family outlays in any condition.
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if
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people
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want
to provide proper facility, they will earn
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money
.
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price
of everything is
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very
high like, food and other usable things, while without these things living is impossible.
That is
why,
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big
salary is most
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important
.
Moreover
, individuals
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want
to
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good
lifestyle and
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want
to
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puchase
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big
cars and spend
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money
on
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improve
lifestyle,
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because
of these they do work without satisfaction. Apart from it, they
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want
to provide better education for their children which is not possible for poor
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people
.
Hence
, they do work for much
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money
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IELTS essay Nowadays everyone want to earn money via jobs high income is more important than work conditions.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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